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Living in the coutry is better or living in the city. Discuss both view

Living in the coutry is better or living in the city. Discuss both view wO9lr

Choosing where to live is often a topic of debate. There are conflicting views about living in the cities bringing you more convenience. I believe that there are more benefits from living in the countrysides. Is often argued that life in the city is more beneficial. This is primarily because of the belief that there are more job opportunities. There is also a belief that life in the cities has a better infrastructure and education opportunities. For example, big cities have a lot of international schools system, English classes are much easier to find. I strongly believe that the countrysides are the better place to live. To begin there is no doubt that pollution is lesser. This is because the more you enter the countryside, the more quality of air improves. Another fact to consider is privacy. This is because most of the houses are located at some distance from one another. To conclude, although I acknowledge that living in the cities is worth it. I would rather lives live in the countryside.

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live
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often
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cities
 bringing you more convenience. I believe that there are more benefits from living in the countrysides.

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often
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because
 of the belief that there are more job opportunities. There is also
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cities
 has a better infrastructure and education opportunities. For example
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big
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cities
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a lot of
 international schools system, English classes are much easier to find.

I strongly
 believe that the countrysides are the better place to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 there is no doubt that pollution is lesser. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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improves
. Another fact to consider is privacy. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 most of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
are located
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some
 distance from one another.

To conclude
, although I acknowledge that living in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 is worth it. I would rather
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lives
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 in the countryside. 