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Learning online is better than common teaching

Learning online is better than common teaching Wy98K

I truly disagree this idea. Because I live in the country and net in my area isn'T good. For example when I learn from online in the middle of the lesson the net may log off. And I can not continue my lessons. Secondly I think the teacher who teaches online must speak ckearly in order to understand all the students who are learning. If he or she doesn't know well they can't teach anybody. Thirdly In my village all of the people who live there can't afford to buy phone or laptop, that's why I don't disagree this kind of opinion. In conclusion In the future online teaching may be common but now tell the truth it isn't necessary.

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