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Learning online is better than common teaching

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I truly disagree this idea. Because I live in the country and net in my area isn'T good. For example when I learn from online in the middle of the lesson the net may log off. And I can not continue my lessons. Secondly I think the teacher who teaches online must speak ckearly in order to understand all the students who are learning. If he or she doesn't know well they can't teach anybody. Thirdly In my village all of the people who live there can't afford to buy phone or laptop, that's why I don't disagree this kind of opinion. In conclusion In the future online teaching may be common but now tell the truth it isn't necessary.
I
truly
disagree this
idea
.
Because
I
live
in the country and net in my area
isn'T
good
.
For example
when I learn from online in the middle of the lesson the net may log off. And I can not continue my lessons.
Secondly
I
think
the teacher who teaches online
must
speak
ckearly
in order to understand all the students who are learning. If he or she doesn't know well they can't teach anybody.
Thirdly
In my village
all of the
people
who
live
there can't afford to
buy
phone or laptop, that's why I don't disagree this kind of opinion.
In conclusion
In the future online teaching may be common
but
now
tell
the truth it isn't necessary.
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IELTS essay Learning online is better than common teaching

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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5.0
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