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Last Saturday I have gone to Panda's sanctuary in Szechuan's province, I was never there in my hole life so that I was really exciting! Meanwhile, I love to appreciate the panda, it's so interesting creature.

Last Saturday I have gone to Panda's sanctuary in Szechuan's province, I was never there in my hole life so that I was really exciting! Meanwhile, I love to appreciate the panda, it's so interesting creature. While we went there, we saw dozens of the pandas. The ones, which we liked the more, were the babies that were so cute! While we were about to return to the home, it suddenly started the snow. Never in a million years could I have imagined to witness a snowfall as sudden, powerful, and dramatic as the one that happened in that day. Along the way home, we stopped by my friend's house picking up a book that she would borrow from me a few months back. I have had to say that I enjoyed to be with her again, therefore, I was annoyed she could keep my book for as long. In any cases, I hope, I would visit my friend and panda reserve in my future, one of the days.
Last Saturday I have gone to Panda's sanctuary in Szechuan's province, I was never there in my hole life
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so
that I was
really
exciting! Meanwhile, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to appreciate the panda, it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
interesting creature. While we went there, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
dozens of the pandas. The ones, which we liked the more, were the babies that were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
cute! While we were about to return to the home, it
suddenly
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started
the snow.
The adverb ‘Never’ is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Never
in a million years could I have
The verb ‘imagined’ is used with the gerund form: “imagined witnessing”.
imagined to witness
a snowfall as sudden, powerful, and
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dramatic


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as
the one that happened in that day. Along the way home, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
by my friend's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
picking up a book that she would borrow from me a few months back. I have had to say that I
The verb ‘enjoyed’ is used with the gerund form: “enjoyed being”.
enjoyed to be
with her again,
therefore
, I
was annoyed
she could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my book for as long. In any cases, I hope, I would visit my friend and panda reserve in my future, one of the days.
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IELTS essay Last Saturday I have gone to Panda's sanctuary in Szechuan's province, I was never there in my hole life so that I was really exciting! Meanwhile, I love to appreciate the panda, it's so interesting creature.

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