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Last Saturday I have gone to Panda's sanctuary in Szechuan's province, I was never there in my hole life so that I was really exciting! Meanwhile, I love to appreciate the panda, it's so interesting creature.

Last Saturday I have gone to Panda's sanctuary in Szechuan's province, I was never there in my hole life so that I was really exciting! Meanwhile, I love to appreciate the panda, it's so interesting creature. While we went there, we saw dozens of the pandas. The ones, which we liked the more, were the babies that were so cute! While we were about to return to the home, it suddenly started the snow. Never in a million years could I have imagined to witness a snowfall as sudden, powerful, and dramatic as the one that happened in that day. Along the way home, we stopped by my friend's house picking up a book that she would borrow from me a few months back. I have had to say that I enjoyed to be with her again, therefore, I was annoyed she could keep my book for as long. In any cases, I hope, I would visit my friend and panda reserve in my future, one of the days.

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so
 that I was really
 exciting! Meanwhile, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to appreciate the panda, it's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 interesting creature. While we went there, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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so
 cute! While we were about to return to the home, it suddenly
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started
 the snow. The adverb ‘Never’ is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Never
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imagined to witness
 a snowfall as sudden, powerful, and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.dramatic.dramatic!dramatic?dramatic:dramatic,dramatic;
dramatic


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as
 the one that happened in that day. Along the way home, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
 by my friend's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 picking up a book that she would borrow from me a few months back. I have had to say that I The verb ‘enjoyed’ is used with the gerund form: “enjoyed being”.enjoyed being
enjoyed to be
 with her again, therefore
, I was annoyed
 she could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 my book for as long. In any cases, I hope, I would visit my friend and panda reserve in my future, one of the days. 