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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? 7MVy
Today advanced technology is increasingly popular. Some people says that life is much better using this machinery’s while others are having difficulty. This essay will discuss the positive and negative of modernization. Nowadays, younger people tend to use computers due to it is more easier and convenient rather than to write a letter. For example, not long ago, people write letters to their loved ones and mailed it to the post office. They waited weeks or even months just to deliver the message. But today having a desktop can make your life easier. Even though your relatives or close friend is in abroad you can call them and talk for hours. Furthermore, you can also videocall them to see each other. Hence, aged one are having trouble using this kind of technology due to they are used to their old fashioned way. The same goes for the ise of dishwasher. Having this kind of machine lessen the time of washing dishes individually. For example if you own a restaurant and number of people came and dine in, anlot of plates and glasses are needed to be wash so next customer can use it. Gladly if you have dishwashers it can clean many plates. Unfortunately, this machines are the cause of unemployment. This equipment can make our lives better but number of people are being fired due to the apparatus that can make their job faster. To conclude, modern technology make our lives convenient and enjoyable. It saves time for people who are busy working and give more beneficial than to be worried.
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Today
advanced technology is
increasingly
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Some
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people
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says
that life is much better using this machinery’s while others are
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having
difficulty. This essay will discuss the
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positive
and
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negative
of modernization.

Nowadays, younger
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people
tend to
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use
computers due to it is
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more easier
and convenient
rather
than to write a letter.
For example
, not long ago,
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people
write letters to their
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loved
ones and mailed it to the post office. They waited weeks or even months
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just
to deliver the message.
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But
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today
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having
a desktop can
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make
your life easier.
Even though
your relatives or close friend is in abroad you can call them and talk for hours.
Furthermore
, you can
also
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videocall
them to
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see
each other.
Hence
, aged one are
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having
trouble using this kind of technology due to they are
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used
to their
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old fashioned
way.

The same goes for the
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ise
of dishwasher.
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Having
this kind of machine lessen the time of washing dishes
individually
.
For example
if you
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own
a restaurant and number of
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people
came and dine in,
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anlot
of plates and glasses
are needed
to be wash
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so
next
customer can
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use
it.
Gladly
if you have dishwashers it can clean
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many
plates. Unfortunately,
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this
machines are the cause of unemployment. This equipment can
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make
our
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lives
better
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but
number of
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people
are
being fired
due to the apparatus that can
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make
their job faster.

To conclude
, modern technology
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make
our
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lives
convenient and enjoyable. It saves time for
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people
who are busy working and give more beneficial than to
be worried
.

IELTS essay Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
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