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Kaplan 4th Edition - Sample Practice 2 - Genetically Modified Foods

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The article claims that planting genetically modifies tress has a number of benefits and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecture explains that the benefits are not enough to justify the benefits of planting genetically modified trees and refutes each of the author's reasons. First, the article posits that the genetically modified trees are designed to survive in the critical environment. However, the lecture explains that the genetically modified trees are designed to survive in some particular environment. Besides, they are also designed to be tolerated to some certain pets. As a result, if the climate changes or the tress are affected by new pests, the genetically modified trees will be hampered greatly. Secondly, the article claims that the genetically modified trees provide a number of economic benefits. However, the lecture refutes this point by saying that the trees have hidden cost. According to the lecture, although, the genetically modified trees are again born from the corresponding seeds, the persons who grow them need to pay the authority from which they have bought the trees first. Third, the article posits that the genetically modified trees can prevent overexploitation of wild trees. However, the lecture refutes this point by saying that although the trees grow rapidly and faster as well, it cannot be a replacement of native wild trees.
The
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article
claims that planting
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genetically
modifies tress has a number of
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benefits
and provides three reasons of support.
However
, the
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lecture
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explains
that the
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benefits
are not
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enough
to justify the
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benefits
of planting
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genetically
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modified
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trees
and refutes each of the author's reasons.

First
, the
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article
posits that the
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genetically
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modified
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trees
are designed
to survive in the critical environment.
However
, the
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lecture
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explains
that the
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genetically
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modified
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trees
are designed
to survive in
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some
particular environment.
Besides
, they are
also
designed to
be tolerated
to
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some
certain pets.
As a result
, if the climate
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changes
or the tress are
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affected
by new pests, the
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genetically
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modified
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trees
will
be hampered
greatly
.

Secondly
, the
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article
claims that the
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genetically
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modified
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trees
provide a number of economic
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benefits
.
However
, the
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lecture
refutes this point by saying that the
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trees
have hidden cost. According to the
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lecture
, although, the
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genetically
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modified
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trees
are again born from the corresponding seeds, the persons who grow them need to pay the authority from which they have
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bought
the
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trees
first
.

Third, the
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article
posits that the
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genetically
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modified
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trees
can
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prevent
overexploitation of wild
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trees
.
However
, the
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lecture
refutes this point by saying that although the
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trees
grow
rapidly
and faster
as well
, it cannot be a replacement of native wild
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trees
.
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IELTS essay Kaplan 4th Edition - Sample Practice 2 - Genetically Modified Foods

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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