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Jane austin painting

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The reading and the lecture are both about Jane Austen self portrait whether it her or not. Whereas the author of the reading states that this painting resemble Jane and provide some evedince, the lecturer suggest that the painting did not resemble Jane. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points made in the reading by providing three reasons. First of all, according to the reading, some members of Austen's family agrees that this painting is for her. However, the lecturer disputes this point. He says that can not be possible. Furthermore, he mentions that it was 70 years since Jane died so there is no way one her living family have seen her alive. Secondly, the reading states that portrait repesent one of the sketch in cassandra's. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument. He argues that Austen family is a big family. In addition, he points out that the family have alot of teenagers. Finally, the rading claims that the style of the painting shows it is similar to Ozias Humphrey and he was active in the same year when Jane was a teenager. On the other hand, the lecturer believe that the one who sells the canvas did not sell any canvas in london untill Jane was 27 yeas old.
The
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and the lecture are both about Jane Austen
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self portrait
whether it her or not. Whereas the author of the
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reading
states that this
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painting
resemble Jane and provide
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some
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evedince
, the
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lecturer
suggest that the
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painting
did not resemble Jane. The
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lecturer
casts doubt on the main points made in the
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reading
by providing three reasons.

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First of all
, according to the
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,
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some
members of Austen's
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family
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agrees
that this
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painting
is for her.
However
, the
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lecturer
disputes this point. He says that can not be possible.
Furthermore
, he mentions that it was 70 years since Jane
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died
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there is no way one her living
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family
have
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seen
her alive.

Secondly
, the
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states that portrait
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cassandra
's.
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, the
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lecturer
refutes this argument. He argues that Austen
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family
is a
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big
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family
.
In addition
, he points out that the
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of
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teenagers
.

Finally
, the
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claims that the style of the
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painting
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it is similar to
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Ozias
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Humphrey and
he was active in the same year when Jane was a
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On the other hand
, the
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believe that the one who sells the canvas did not sell any canvas in
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london
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untill
Jane was 27 yeas
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IELTS essay Jane austin painting

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
212 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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