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The article states that the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitation in Britain.

The article states that the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitation in Britain. 3a70X
The article states that the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitation in Britain. However, the professor mentions that in 1990 a new guide line was adapted, and helped to solve all the problems that mentioned in the article, and this clearly disagrees with what the Author’s wrote. First, the reading asserts that many valuable artifacts were lost to construction projects. The professor refutes this point by saying that in the new guide line, before any construction’s site would start, an archaeologist must observes the site and declares that the site doesn’t have any artifacts. She adds that if the archaeologist found anything, the construction must changes the place or builds near the old site but not at the same spot. Second, the article posits that many archaeologists felt that the financial support for research was inadequate. On the other hand, the professor contends that after the new guide line the archaeologists have a new source of financial support rather than the government. According to the professor, the construction’s company needs to pay for the archaeologist to work for their site and declare that it doesn’t contain any artifact. Third, the article claims that it was difficult to have a career in archaeology because there were never many positions available. The professor refutes this point by saying that after the constructional guide line approved, expert archaeologists needed and hired in all constructional sites. She adds that this action creates many jobs and more people want to have a career in archaeology in Britain.
The
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article
states that the science of archaeology
was faced
with serious problems and limitation in Britain.
However
, the
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professor
mentions that in 1990 a
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new
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guide
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line
was adapted
, and
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helped
to solve all the problems that mentioned in the
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article
, and this
clearly
disagrees with what the Author’s wrote.

First
, the reading asserts that
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many
valuable artifacts
were lost
to
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construction
projects. The
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professor
refutes this point by saying that in the
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new
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guide
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line
,
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before
any
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construction’s
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site
would
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start
, an
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archaeologist
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must
The verb 'must' requires the base form of the verb: "observe"
observes
the
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site
and declares that the
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site
doesn’t have any artifacts. She
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adds
that if the
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archaeologist
found anything, the
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construction
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must
The verb 'must' requires the base form of the verb: "change"
changes
the place or builds near the
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old
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site
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but
not at the same spot.

Second, the
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article
posits that
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many
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archaeologists
felt that the financial support for research was inadequate.
On the other hand
, the
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professor
contends that after the
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new
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guide
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line
the
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archaeologists
have a
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new
source of financial support
rather
than the
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government
. According to the
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professor
, the
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construction’s
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company
needs to pay for the
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archaeologist
to work for their
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site
and declare that it doesn’t contain any artifact.

Third, the
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article
claims that it was difficult to have a career in archaeology
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because
there were never
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many
positions available. The
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professor
refutes this point by saying that after the constructional
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guide
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line
approved, expert
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archaeologists
needed and hired in all constructional
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sites
. She
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adds
that this action creates
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many
jobs and more
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people
want to have a career in archaeology in Britain.
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IELTS essay The article states that the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitation in Britain.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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