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iving away from parents while studying at tertiary level

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Firstly, as we all know, living away from parents while studying at tertiary level, allows a student to crete one's own network of friends and aqcuaintances, not those inspected by parents as peple they might think are appropriate friends. Like for example, when I went to college I met Maria who turned out to be my bestfriend now. I also got introduced to Mark. We had a short relationship as gf and bf, but we're just friends now. Also, all my batchmates before are still close friends of mine. We even see each other monthly for reunions.
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IELTS essay iving away from parents while studying at tertiary level

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  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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