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It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible - you cannot have both together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible - you cannot have both together. with this statement? QQBw
There is no doubt that these days the technology progression has a great impact on our life and culture across various generations. Some people claim that there is an inverse relationship between the development of technology and traditional cultures. Moreover, they are widely considered to be unable to maintain both of them simultaneously. This essay will argue why technology and traditional cultures are partially against each other. People follow the traditional cultures blindly, they are trapped in their cultures which mostly vanished with technology and globalization. To illustrate, once the internet was established in their homes they had noticed others cultures and reformed their own. For example, online learning and scholarship programs has influenced Saudi culture such as female education, which forces students to live in a vastly different environment from home country, they are back with new ideas as a part of their personality and that lead to cultural changes in Saudi families and workplaces. In other words, the varieties of technology in people’s life are assisting in exploring and exchanging cultures easily which reflect on their behavior and lifestyles. Despite spread of social media applications, people keep several cultures immutable. The reason is the cultural differences are the key to determine the identity of each nation. For instance, Muslims have shared their traditional food and specific decoration of Ramadan on Facebook for ages as part of their cultural identity. These means as technology develops, a number of traditional cultures might remain fixed because of peoples chosen to preserve it. In conclusion, although the technology facilitates our lives, we cannot deny that the traditional cultures make us feel different from each other. Therefore, I partially agree that technology and traditional culture are a contrast to each other. However, technology is irresistible and preserving cultures is optional.
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progression has a great impact on our life and
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culture
across various generations.
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claim that there is an inverse relationship between the development of
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and
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traditional
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cultures
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considered to be unable to maintain both of them
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follow the
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blindly
, they
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which
mostly
vanished with
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technology
and globalization. To illustrate, once the internet
was established
in their homes they had noticed others
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cultures
and reformed their
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own
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, online learning and scholarship programs has influenced Saudi
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culture
such as female education, which forces students to
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environment from home country, they are back with new
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ideas
as a part of their personality and that lead to cultural
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changes
in Saudi families and workplaces. In
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technology
in
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life are assisting in exploring and exchanging
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which reflect on their behavior and lifestyles.

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immutable. The reason is the cultural differences are the key to determine the identity of each nation.
For instance
, Muslims have shared their
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traditional
food and specific decoration of Ramadan on Facebook for ages as part of their cultural identity. These means as
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technology
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develops
, a number of
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, although the
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facilitates our
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lives
, we cannot deny that the
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traditional
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cultures
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are a contrast to each
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However
,
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is irresistible and preserving
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cultures
is optional.
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IELTS essay It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible - you cannot have both together. with this statement?

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4 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
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