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It is believed by some that, the universities should provide entry to those who get great marks in their school academics. However, other people asserted that they should give seats to all pupils such as those who are impoverished in their education and should accept all age group. I will examine both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraph. On the one hand, at current time competitions between students are so remarkable by this universities should provide admissions to those students who are eligible and best in their past examination. For example, most of the students do hard work to clear the entrance exam of the universities they spend a lot of time for the perpetration if they give seats to all pupils it is unfair for intelligent learners. Moreover, if they add students with a high score it is beneficial for the reputation of any institute because every student is brilliant by getting good scores so they gave fame to the name of any institute. Besides, they should enter same age g

It is believed by some that, the universities should provide entry to those who get great marks in their school academics. However, other people asserted that they should give seats to all pupils such as those who are impoverished in their education and should accept all age group. I will examine both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraph. On the one hand, at current time competitions between students are so remarkable by this universities should provide admissions to those students who are eligible and best in their past examination. For example, most of the students do hard work to clear the entrance exam of the universities they spend a lot of time for the perpetration if they give seats to all pupils it is unfair for intelligent learners. Moreover, if they add students with a high score it is beneficial for the reputation of any institute because every student is brilliant by getting good scores so they gave fame to the name of any institute. Besides, they should enter same age group students owing to this, for better environment sometimes elders are feeling shy in the front of young students due to this they cannot give their better performance in the front of teachers. On the other hand, it is valuable for the nation if a university gets admission to all students without any discrimination between Intelligent and poor students. In other words, every learner wants to get an opportunity to study in a better place because government university fees are very reasonable sometimes a student cannot afford private institution fees so that university gives admission to all student it will help to reduce the uneducated level in the country. Moreover, there is no age for learning they give admission to all people going to everyone have equal rights to take education at any age. In conclusion, I would like to be reiterated that, due to hard competition universities provided seat to those who are best students rather than poor because what students are only wastage of money.

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