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It is argued that technology become a part of our lives, and it is include in different fields such as education, industry and commerce.

Technology use is said to play an important role in Field of teachings. Ease of access to the information required by students is one of the main advantages of this, and the required interaction between the teacher and students is reduced from the main disadvantages. One of the main advantages of increasing the use of electronic devices is the ease of obtaining the information that the student needs in his field of study. Students have the ease of searching and studying any topic they want extensively online. An example of this is the availability of many websites covering a myriad of topics, which enable students to obtain the highest information they want to obtain. This has improved students' performance in terms of speed of learning and access to information. The main disadvantage associated with the increased use of technology in education is the reduction in the required interaction between professor and students. Students spend a lot of time using computer screens on their own Which reduces the perceptual contact between students and their professors directly. For example, the last challenge in using smartphones and computers in education was at the expense of required human communication. This negatively impacts communication skills, such as verbal and visual communication. In conclusion, the benefits that technology brings to education, such as saving time, must be weighed against the disadvantages, such as the negative effects on human interaction. In general, the benefits The benefits outweigh the disadvantages because students will only do so in education, while making human contact with the people around them and the people they interact with.
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of electronic devices is the
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of obtaining the information that the
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needs in his field of study.

Students have the
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ease
of searching and studying any topic they want
extensively
online.

An example of this is the availability of
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many
websites covering a myriad of topics, which enable
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students
to obtain the highest information they want to obtain.

This has
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improved
students' performance in terms of speed of learning and access to information.

The
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main
disadvantage associated with the increased
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use
of technology in
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education
is the reduction in the
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required
interaction between professor and students.

Students spend
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time using computer screens on their
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reduces
the perceptual contact between
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and their professors
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.

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education
was at the expense of
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human communication.

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skills
, such as verbal and visual communication.

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education
, such as saving time,
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effects on human interaction.

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IELTS essay It is argued that technology become a part of our lives, and it is include in different fields such as education, industry and commerce.

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
265 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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