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rather
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live
in a boarding
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house
than staying with relatives in the city

George can lift a 50-kilogram sack of rice

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change


Can you
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come
to my party

Nora cannot sing anymore, she is able to compose songs

Tanya has not received the
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Balikpapan
box from her sister in the states, it might be
still
in transit

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can
you
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turn off the air conditioner. It's too
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cold
in
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it
should be the duty of public officials the role models to the
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people
they serve

Medical care over the past century has
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improved
dramatically
. As a consequence, the world's population is
increasingly
living Long into
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age. Is this having a harmful effect on societies across the globe, or are there more
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benefits
than drawbacks?

One obvious issue with an
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ageing
population is that it can create enormous demands on a nation's health service. As
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people
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live
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longer
into their
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age, the chances of them suffering from serious illnesses increases.
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, the likelihood of them requiring medical treatment becomes higher, and it becomes more difficult to provide care for everyone. A
further
downside is that living
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longer
does not
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bring happiness. By this I mean, an
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older
person is unable to do
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of the activities that they want to do, leading to the likelihood of depression and a deterioration in their physical health.

Having said that, one obvious
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living
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members of their families. In
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comforting to seek advice from
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older
generations.
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, the physical health of a grandparent is almost irrelevant, as the children and grandchildren will
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benefit
from the experience of an
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older
mind.
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people
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much healthier than they have ever been, and
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enjoy their
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more than they did when they were young. They have the best of both worlds
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a family that can care for and look up to them,
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IELTS essay Is it safe to use vaccination agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
354 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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