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Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently?

Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Aja8e
Working’s skills and abilities should be considered as an important factor in our life. People spend 8 hours at least in 5 day of a week on their works. Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that everyone should work in your own way independently, contrary to this belief there are some others who argue that working in a team is the most essential character for anyone. I am inclined to believe that working independently is more important for improving the abilities and skills and evaluating workers. The first aspect to point out is that working independently improves the skills. Challenging in your own work improve your skills and abilities and It force you to think for solving problems in your own methods, so after a period of working without helping of any person, you can clearly feel creativity and innovation in your characteristics. Furthermore, it increases the self-confidence for deciding. For example, when I worked in a research center in my university I always work on a specific task and I am responsible for it and all other people expect me for an excellent outcome. Therefore, I am probing many methods, working hard and studying many materials. After working for three months, I can manage my work and decide easily in critical situation. As you can see, responsibility of working on your own equipped you with abilities which you did not have before. Another significant point which should be into consideration is that working independently lead to better and clear evaluation of employees. When people work in groups, it cannot be indicated who proposed an idea and who do the work. However, by giving specific responsibilities for each person the outcome can be investigated clearly. For example, I worked in a car company two years ago and I was a member of research and development group. I played an important role in creating many ideas and novel mechanism which were proposed by our team. However, only one of my coworker who was act as the leader of the group presented works for the manager of company, so all people think that all ideas was developed by leader while I did near 60 percent of works. As you can see, the lack of clear work evaluating system is obvious in group based jobs. On the basis of the point which are mentioned above, I am convinced that working independently make people more creative and promote their skills. Furthermore, it has the benefit of better evaluating system in comparison with group based working. Who could be serious in the job when he works in a group? The companies only can have expert employees by giving them special responsibilities and force to work independently.
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accepted
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work
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argue that
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working
in a team is the most essential character for anyone. I
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to believe that
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working
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independently
is more
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important
for improving the
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abilities
and
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skills
and evaluating workers.

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first
aspect to point out is that
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working
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independently
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improves
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skills
. Challenging in your
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for solving problems in your
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own
methods,
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after a period of
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working
without helping of any person, you can
clearly
feel creativity and innovation in your characteristics.
Furthermore
, it increases the self-confidence for deciding.
For example
, when I worked in a research center in my university I always
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work
on a specific
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task and
I am responsible for it and all other
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people
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expect
me for an excellent outcome.
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, I am probing
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many
methods,
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working
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hard
and studying
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many
materials. After
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working
for three months, I can manage my
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work
and decide
easily
in critical situation. As you can
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see
, responsibility of
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working
on your
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own
equipped you with
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abilities
which you did not have
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before
.

Another significant point which should be into consideration is that
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working
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independently
lead to better and
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clear
evaluation of employees. When
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people
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in
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groups
, it cannot
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who
proposed an
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do the
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.
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, by giving specific responsibilities for each person the outcome can
be investigated
clearly
.
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, I worked in a car
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company
two years
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ago and
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group
. I played an
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important
role in creating
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many
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ideas
and novel mechanism which
were proposed
by our team.
However
,
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only
one of my coworker
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who
was act as the leader of the
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group
presented works for the manager of
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company
,
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ideas
was developed
by leader while I did near 60 percent of works. As you can
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see
, the lack of
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clear
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work
evaluating system is obvious in
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group
based jobs.

On the basis of the point which
are mentioned
above, I
am convinced
that
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working
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independently
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make
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people
more creative and promote their
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skills
.
Furthermore
, it has the benefit of better evaluating system
in comparison
with
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group
based
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working
.
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could be serious in the job when he works in a
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group
? The
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companies
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only
can have expert employees by giving them special responsibilities and force to
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work
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independently
.
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IELTS essay Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
450 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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