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Involving technology in classroom learning has more drawbacks than benefits. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Some people argue that technology has been contributed negative impacts to students’ process of teaching and learning because it reduces face to face interaction. However, I completely disagree on this opinion. There are several reasons behind this view which this essay will discuss. To begin with, integrating technology into online learning has a significant contribution in education sector. When schools are integrating technology into classroom learning. Students may find out lessons more easily and interestingly. Furthermore, technology also can help teachers to create virtual classroom, which allows students to participate a lesson from anywhere in the world. It also may lead students to more effective and efficient teaching and learning environment, for example, teaching and learning environment that provided by the government of Finland. Furthermore, advancement in technology also contributes more benefits to the students’ learning process. For instance, being a computer literate. In the era of techno-savvy students are demanding from the cutting-edge technology, and it supports the way students obtain information about computer literation as well. In contrast, using conventional methods on approaching subjects is not effective to gain specific skills and create a comfortable environment. Conventional teaching and learning methods can be ineffective, such as, face to face interaction, this might be led students physiologically under captivate. This may be resulting lack of participants, the students may uncomfortable and unable to interact with other students widely from other places widely. In conclusion, there are a number of benefits from advance technology contributing to schools learning systems compare to disadvantages. Technology also shape how students understand and explore lessons more effectively, and technology is not only helps students, but also teachers and specialists.
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, I completely disagree on this opinion. There are several reasons behind this view which this essay will discuss.

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with, integrating
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into online
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has a significant contribution in education sector.
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schools are integrating
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into classroom
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learning
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may find out lessons more
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and
interestingly
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teachers to create virtual classroom, which
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environment that provided by the
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government
of Finland.

Furthermore
, advancement in
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also
contributes more benefits to the
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students’
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learning
process.
For instance
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computer literate
. In the era of techno-savvy
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students
are demanding from the cutting-edge
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, and it supports the way
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obtain information about computer
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literation
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skills
and create a comfortable environment. Conventional
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teaching
and
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methods can be ineffective, such as,
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face
to
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interaction, this might
be led
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students
physiologically
under captivate. This may be resulting lack of participants, the
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students
may uncomfortable and unable to interact with other
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students
widely
from other places
widely
.

In conclusion
, there are a number of benefits from advance
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contributing to schools
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learning
systems compare to disadvantages.
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also
shape how
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understand and explore lessons more
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teachers and specialists.
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IELTS essay Involving technology in classroom learning has more drawbacks than benefits.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
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