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Involve employees in decision-making

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it is irrefutable to say that, employees are the heart of the company's. We all know the employees must be well taken cared off as they are the one who helps us make a company's work and make a profit. many people believe that employees must involve in the decision making of the company, but other opine and will agree that no need for the employees to be theirs during the company's meeting and decision making. These paragraphs will assert both sides of the argument and an appropriate conclusion will be made. At the outset, it is believed that companies must include their employees during decision making as employees are more hands-on to their work. For instance, big companies take their employees ' recommendations as well as suggestions in order to make a better profit. Furthermore, good teamwork helps the company achieve its desired goals. On the other hand, many people tend to argue that no need for employees to involve in decision-making. As for them, it will just create bias in terms of own personal gain. Moreover, it will create a chaotic meeting as there will be lots of suggestions and recommendations to take into it. To recapitulate, involving employees in decision making outweigh the opposite. companies must take into consideration the employee's voice in order for the employees to stay longer as for them they are valued.
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employees
are the heart of the
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company
's. We all know the
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employees
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must
be well taken cared off as they are the one who
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helps
us
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company
's work and
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make
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many
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people
believe that
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employees
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must
involve in the
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decision making
of the
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company
,
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but
other opine and will
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agree
that no need for the
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employees
to be theirs during the
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company
's meeting and
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decision making
. These paragraphs will assert both sides of the argument and an appropriate conclusion will
be made
.

At the outset, it
is believed
that
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companies
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must
include their
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employees
during
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decision making
as
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employees
are more hands-on to their work.
For instance
,
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big
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companies
take their
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employees
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'
recommendations
as well
as suggestions in order to
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make
a better profit.
Furthermore
,
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good
teamwork
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helps
the
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company
achieve its desired goals.

On the other hand
,
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many
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people
tend to argue that no need for
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employees
to involve in decision-making. As for them, it will
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just
create bias in terms of
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own
personal gain.
Moreover
, it will create a chaotic meeting as there will be lots of suggestions and recommendations to take into it.

To recapitulate, involving
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employees
in
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decision making
outweigh the opposite.
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companies
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must
take into consideration the employee's voice in order for the
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employees
to stay longer as for them they
are valued
.
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IELTS essay Involve employees in decision-making

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
229 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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