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International travel is becoming coming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantage of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages.

In recent years governments allowed to go abroad to travel all around world is booming that approximately all of them opening the border for tourists and in this case the going is becoming cheaper, which has created too many pros of this condition than cons of this. In this essay I will try to demonstrate relevant ideas for both sides with prime examples. First of all we can learn about peaceful situation in many developed countries that can be cause of many new opportunities to exchange trade among other countries especially allow to foreigners to enter the country is the biggest scope for everyone. The first positive side of this is travel all around the world with affordable prices which is new airports have been built in recent years that could be the main factor of decreasing costs of flight in the plane. The second one is increasing number of tourists vital to government’s budget simultaneously it lead to benefit in intellectual way of the brain for people that help broaden the horizons of and they can think more understand deeply about others. According to the statistics result 15% of the world’s people travelled 3 years ago after that this percentage were increased after this year while decreased sharply during the quarantine. Nevertheless, it has the negative effects just like some people want to go another country as a mask of tourists however at the end of this they work illegally instead of travel. Another negative influence is after the travelling more pronounce their language with breaking sound and adding new vocabulary from other country that others could not feel them what they mean. In fact nearly 15% of travellers escaped and working abroad illegally. In conclusion, there are many advantages of this phenomenon that more heavy than negatives that can help to develop our daily live with brain condition.
In recent years
governments
allowed
to go
abroad to travel all around world is booming that approximately all of them opening the border for tourists and
in this case
the going is becoming cheaper, which has created too
many
pros of this condition than cons of this. In this essay I will try to demonstrate relevant
ideas
for both sides with prime examples.

First of all
we can learn about peaceful situation in
many
developed
countries
that can
be cause
of
many
new opportunities to exchange trade among
other
countries
especially
allow
to foreigners to enter the
country
is the biggest scope for everyone. The
first
positive
side of this is travel all around the world with affordable prices which is new airports have
been built
in recent years that could be the main factor of decreasing costs of flight in the
plane
. The second one is increasing number of tourists vital to
government
’s budget
simultaneously
it
lead
to benefit in intellectual way of the brain for
people
that
help
broaden the horizons
of and
they can
think
more understand
deeply
about others. According to the statistics result 15% of the world’s
people
travelled 3 years ago after that this percentage
were increased
after this
year
while decreased
sharply
during the quarantine.

Nevertheless
, it has the
negative
effects
just
like
some
people
want to go another
country
as a mask of tourists
however
at the
end
of this they work
illegally
instead
of travel. Another
negative
influence is after the travelling more pronounce their language with breaking sound and adding new vocabulary from
other
country
that others could not feel them what they mean. In fact
nearly
15% of
travellers
escaped and working abroad
illegally
.

In conclusion
, there are
many
advantages of this phenomenon that more heavy than negatives that can
help
to develop our daily
live
with brain condition.
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IELTS essay International travel is becoming coming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantage of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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