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Integrated WRITING - Bermuda Triangle

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The professor in his lecture tries to refute the mystical properties ascribed to Bermuda Triangle by the author of the reading. In the reading passage the author supports his reasoning with several examples of strange events that took place near Bermuda Triangle, which are then demystified by the lecturer. The professor gives scientific explanation for each mysterious "swallows" of ships and aircrafts by waters in the Devil's Triangle area. Firstly, the professor claims that the mysterious lights in the sky seen by C. Columbus in 1492 while he was exploring the neighborhoods of Bermuda Tri. . .
The professor in his lecture tries to refute the mystical properties ascribed to Bermuda Triangle by the author of the reading. In the reading passage the author supports his reasoning with several examples of strange
events
that took place near Bermuda Triangle, which are then demystified by the lecturer. The professor gives scientific explanation for each mysterious
"
swallows
"
of ships and
aircrafts
by waters in the Devil's Triangle area.

Firstly
, the professor claims that the mysterious lights in the sky
seen
by C. Columbus in 1492 while he was exploring the neighborhoods of Bermuda
Tri
.
.
.
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IELTS essay Integrated WRITING - Bermuda Triangle

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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