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admission to school..applying to only first choice or to several schools?

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Regarding the admission to the schools students may have different plans. A few students apply for admission to their first choice school only while others apply to several schools. I prefer the second plan to apply to several schools. This is because of two reasons. First, application to several schools guarantees admission to any one of the choice and second, this helps to compare educational standards of the schools. If we are applying to only one school it doesnt guarantee the admission even for highly qualified students. The admission requirements of the universities varies. It may be based on academic qualification or may be based on exams like GRE and TOEFL scores. So for students who are applying only to their first choice school, it is not necessary to get admission because of several reasons like lack of number of seats available. Thus applying to several schools helps the student to get admission to one of the school they have applied and also helps to save time and trouble they may pose if not getting admission to the first choice school they have applied. Another reason to apply to several schools is the opportunity to learn the different standards and the educational options available during the application process. There may be several advantages for a particular school over the other. For example grants, scholarships, research assistance may be available for an institution at the time of application process which may be informed only during the communication with the school officials. These unpublished advantages are obtained only while contacting the several schools which may not be available with the first choice school. Therefore during admission I will apply to more than two or more schools. If I am getting admission to the first choice school I will be happy or even if I am getting admission to the second or third choice schools I will be satisfied with that.
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to their
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choice
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to several
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. I prefer the second plan to
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. This is
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, application to several
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guarantees
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admission
to any one of the
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choice
and second, this
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helps
to compare educational standards of the schools.

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one
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school
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doesnt
guarantee the
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admission
even for
highly
qualified
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students
. The
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admission
requirements of the universities varies. It may
be based
on academic qualification or may
be based
on exams like GRE and TOEFL scores.
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for
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students
who are applying
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choice
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school
, it is not necessary to
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get
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because
of several reasons like lack of number of seats
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available
.
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applying to several
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schools
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helps
the
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to
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they have applied and
also
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helps
to save time and trouble they may pose if not getting
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admission
to the
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first
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choice
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school
they have applied.

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to several
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schools
is the opportunity to learn the
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different
standards and the educational options
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available
during the application process. There may be several advantages for a particular
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school
over the other.
For example
grants, scholarships, research assistance may be
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available
for an institution at the time of application process which may
be informed
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only
during the communication with the
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school
officials. These unpublished advantages
are obtained
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only
while contacting the several
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schools
which may not be
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available
with the
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first
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choice
school.

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during
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I will
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apply
to more than two or more
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schools
. If I am getting
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admission
to the
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first
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choice
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school
I will be happy or even if I am getting
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admission
to the second or third
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choice
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schools
I will
be satisfied
with that.
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IELTS essay admission to school. . applying to only first choice or to several schools?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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