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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. 1gBG
With advancements in technology and progression in aspects of globalisation and urbanisation, greater attention is being paid to address ways in which improvements can be made to sustain the environment. Governments and private organisations are able to fund projects with such aims, giving them high success rates as compared to individual contributions in this respect, which may appear to be null and void. I, however, believe that individuals have the ability to make phenomenal changes that are sustainable to the environment taking into consideration that collectively individuals have a greater reach into their communities and are therefore able to educate, motivate, monitor and continuously improve the environment, even in the smallest ways possible, especially through lifestyle changes. Communities in cities and towns alike, require a great amount of education, continuous encouragement, assistance and guidance on methods that lead to environmental improvements. Individuals within a community are able to provide this kind of support as they are able to reach more individuals in their communities, creating awareness and providing people with a tangibility on what they are learning. From my personal experience, teachers within a school environment have the greatest influence on the students they teach. A teacher in my school community was able to incorporate environmental sustainability into her science lessons. Students learned about environmental change- its cause and effects and were asked to do research on ways in which they would be able to contribute towards protecting and rehabilitating the environment. Many learners designed awareness posters and displayed these around the school, whilst a few others participated in prepared speeches and debates on environmental issues. The teacher in question was asked to curate an environmental club in which members would work together on environmental community based projects. This teacher’s individual actions made her learners aware of the importance of environmental improvement and sustainability, which created a chain reaction, where these students are now doing the same. Private organisations and governments are able to fund large projects that may entail educating people about environmental change, the importance of sustainable usage of natural resources and advantages on working together to protect and rehabilitate the environment. Although large organisations and governmental institutes are able to do this, there is heavy reliance on a group of individuals within a community to ensure that relevant information and activities reach the intended audience and achieve the desired results. In retrospect, it is still primarily the individual who will make significant changes to his lifestyle, spread awareness and continue to focus on changes that will improve the environment long after funding for affiliated projects has ceased. Individuals can contribute substantially to environmental improvements, making great leaps to a better future for all. Furthermore governments, private companies and individuals unanimously will be able to reach a bigger audience especially in disadvantaged communities, creating greater awareness for sustainable environmental change.
With advancements in technology and progression in aspects of
globalisation
and
urbanisation
, greater attention is
being paid
to address ways in which
improvements
can
be made
to sustain the
environment
.
Governments
and private
organisations
are
able
to fund
projects
with such aims, giving them high success rates as compared to
individual
contributions in this respect, which may appear to be null and void. I,
however
, believe that
individuals
have the ability to
make
phenomenal
changes
that are sustainable to the
environment
taking into consideration that
collectively
individuals
have a greater
reach
into their
communities
and are
therefore
able
to educate, motivate, monitor and
continuously
improve
the
environment
, even in the smallest ways possible,
especially
through lifestyle
changes
.

Communities in cities and towns alike, require a great amount of education, continuous encouragement, assistance and guidance on methods that lead to
environmental
improvements
.
Individuals
within a
community
are
able
to provide this kind of support as they are
able
to
reach
more
individuals
in their
communities
, creating
awareness
and providing
people
with a tangibility on what they are learning.

From my personal experience,
teachers
within a school
environment
have the greatest influence on the students they teach. A
teacher
in my school
community
was
able
to incorporate
environmental
sustainability into her science lessons. Students learned about
environmental
change-
its cause and effects and
were asked
to do research on ways in which they would be
able
to contribute towards protecting and rehabilitating the
environment
.
Many
learners designed
awareness
posters and displayed these around the school, whilst a few others participated in prepared speeches and debates on
environmental
issues. The
teacher
in question
was asked
to curate an
environmental
club in which members would work together on
environmental
community
based
projects
. This
teacher’s
individual
actions made her

learners aware of the importance of
environmental
improvement
and sustainability, which created a chain reaction, where these students are
now
doing the same.

Private
organisations
and
governments
are
able
to fund large
projects
that may entail educating
people
about
environmental
change
, the importance of sustainable usage

of natural resources and advantages on working together to protect and rehabilitate the
environment
. Although large
organisations
and governmental institutes are
able
to do this, there is heavy reliance on a group of
individuals
within a
community
to ensure that relevant information and activities
reach
the intended audience and achieve the desired results. In retrospect, it is
still
primarily
the
individual
who will
make
significant
changes
to his lifestyle, spread
awareness
and continue to focus on
changes
that will
improve
the
environment
long after funding for affiliated
projects
has ceased.

Individuals can contribute
substantially
to
environmental
improvements
, making great leaps to a better future for all.
Furthermore
governments
, private
companies
and
individuals
unanimously
will be
able
to
reach
a bigger audience
especially
in disadvantaged
communities
, creating greater
awareness
for sustainable
environmental
change
.
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IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

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