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Indeed, the spacing between the rich and the poor is widening day by day in many regions of the world leading to socioeconomic problems.

Indeed, the spacing between the rich and the poor is widening day by day in many regions of the world leading to socioeconomic problems. 2OYA
Indeed, the spacing between the rich and the poor is widening day by day in many regions of the world leading to socioeconomic problems. The government should always strive towards minimizing this gap. Whilst the problems that result are too complex, the ground solution based on expanding education should be adhered to tackle this situation Firstly, the main problem caused by unequal distribution of wealth is that education has become unaccessible to the poor. Nowadays quality education has become very expensive. Majority schools and colleges which are very costly and not within the reach of poor people, making them not able to compete for high paying jobs and it becomes a fundamental disadvantage. Another important issue is the increase in crime rates. As neglected groups most often do not make enough money to meet their basic needs, they resort to heinous acts like burglary, theft, prostitution, etc. Firstly, the government should develop schemes and provide scholarships which will help people from the poor section afford quality education. Quota system can also be one of the solutions.  In addition, authorities should help such needy people by making them aware of opportunities available all over and how to excel in their fields. The government of India, for example, has introduced many schemes to empower the poor. While poverty is still an issue in the country, the life standards of the poor are increasing slowly. In conclusion, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening and has created many problems like an increase in crime rates. However, if the government makes enough policies and stringent laws it is possible to solve these problems.
Indeed
, the spacing between the rich and the
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poor
is widening day by day in
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many
regions of the world leading to socioeconomic
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problems
. The
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government
should always strive towards minimizing this gap. Whilst the
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problems
that result are too complex, the ground solution based on expanding
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education
should
be adhered
to tackle this
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situation


Firstly
, the main
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problem
caused by unequal distribution of wealth is that
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education
has become
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unaccessible
to the
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poor
. Nowadays quality
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education
has become
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very
expensive. Majority schools and colleges which are
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very
costly and not within the reach of
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poor
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people
, making them not able to compete for high paying jobs and it becomes a fundamental disadvantage. Another
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important
issue is the increase in crime rates. As neglected groups most
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often
do not
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make
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enough
money to
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meet
their basic needs, they resort to heinous acts like burglary, theft, prostitution, etc.

Firstly
, the
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government
should develop schemes and provide scholarships which will
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help
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people
from the
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poor
section afford quality
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education
. Quota system can
also
be one of the solutions.  
In addition
, authorities should
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help
such needy
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people
by making them aware of opportunities available all over and how to excel in their fields. The
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government
of India,
for example
, has introduced
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many
schemes to empower the
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poor
. While poverty is
still
an issue in the country, the life standards of the
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poor
are increasing
slowly
.

In conclusion
, the gap between the rich and the
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poor
is widening and has created
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many
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problems
like an increase in crime rates.
However
, if the
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government
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makes
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enough
policies and stringent laws it is possible to solve these
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problems
.
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IELTS essay Indeed, the spacing between the rich and the poor is widening day by day in many regions of the world leading to socioeconomic problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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