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increasing in modern technology

In the present world, there is great automation in all fields. To learn and contribute to automation, I chose Electronics as my stream for Undergraduate studies. Here, I was introduced to major fields of study such as Physics, Mathematics, Electrical, and Computer Science through my coursework. Data Structures was one of the courses in the Third semester which helped me understand machines, processing, and better memory management
In the present world, there is great automation in all fields. To learn and contribute to automation, I chose Electronics as my stream for Undergraduate studies. Here, I
was introduced
to major fields of study such as Physics, Mathematics, Electrical, and Computer Science through my coursework. Data Structures was one of the courses in the Third semester which
helped
me understand machines, processing, and better memory
management
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IELTS essay increasing in modern technology

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
66 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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