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In this set of materials the article posits that the person in the famous painting of the Austen family is Jane Austen who was an English novelists.

In this set of materials the article posits that the person in the famous painting of the Austen family is Jane Austen who was an English novelists. aw8Dw
In this set of materials the article posits that the person in the famous painting of the Austen family is Jane Austen who was an English novelists. In this regard, it provides three reason of support. However the lecturer raise question on these ideas and presents some evidence to refute them all. First, the author of the reading passage states that Austen's family let publishers to use this painting on Jane's letters after her death and this fact proves that this portrait was her picture. On the contrast the professor refutes this point by saying that Jane was dead 70 years before that time. Moreover, the painter didn't see her, so this painting can't belong to Jane. The next explanation uttered in the article is that face of the girl in the painting is very similar to the Jane's face. In contrast, the lecturer explains that Austen family had many young members in that time and all of them was similar to each other. Therefore, this painting can depict another girl in her family. According to the professor, this picture belongs to Marry Austen. The last reason which is mentioned by author of the reading passage is that there are some evidence which indicates time of this painting was during Jane's life. Conversely, the speaker claims that other evidence such as staffs in the painting revealed other things. For example, William Austen bought the candle on the painting when Jane was older than the girl in the painting. So, the girl on the picture can't be Jane.
In this set of materials the article posits that the person in the
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painting
of the Austen
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family
is Jane Austen who was an English
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. In this regard, it provides three reason of support.
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ideas
and presents
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evidence to refute them all.

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, the author of the reading passage states that Austen's
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family
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let
publishers to
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use
this
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painting
on Jane's letters after her death and this fact proves that this portrait was her picture. On the contrast the professor refutes this point by saying that Jane was dead 70 years
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before
that time.
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, the painter didn't
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see
her,
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this
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painting
can't belong to Jane.

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next
explanation uttered in the article is that face of the
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girl
in the
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painting
is
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very
similar to the Jane's face.
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, the lecturer
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explains
that Austen
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family
had
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many
young members in that time and all of them was similar to each other.
Therefore
, this
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painting
can depict another
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girl
in her
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family
. According to the professor, this picture belongs to Marry Austen.

The last reason which
is mentioned
by author of the reading passage is that there are
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some
evidence which indicates time of this
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painting
was during Jane's life.
Conversely
, the speaker claims that other evidence such as staffs in the
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painting
revealed other things.
For example
, William Austen
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bought
the candle on the
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painting
when Jane was older than the
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girl
in the
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painting
.
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So
, the
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girl
on the picture can't be Jane.
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IELTS essay In this set of materials the article posits that the person in the famous painting of the Austen family is Jane Austen who was an English novelists.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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