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Many a person alleges that in retrospect

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Nowadayes, developing countries have variety of mutinational corporations, witch are common. These companies have many benefits for developing country and also they are caused some impediments for local people. Multinational companies are the main key components of impressive development in several countries. They prompt many singificant advantages. Thankfully, by recruitment many skilled person around the globe, they can solved a normous amount of problems in their company and also in their country by spending a minimum cost. Upbringing a expert employee are a expensive process for them and also exploring in local people ma be impossible. By generate venue for other inernational people from other nation, they can decrease the costs, and therefore, they can increase their beneficiaries. For example, many companies employ programmers around the words, because they can not find any person in their countries. On the contrary, These companies have also had tiny disadvantages. Firstly, employ people from different culture and religion is the fundumental issue for variety if conflicts between coworkers. They do not inform about other culture and not only for unintended behaviour prompt they some negative effects on other person but also for unknowing about other cultures. Secondly, an unavoidable consequences of recruiting foriegn people in a company is mass unemployment in the country. The oportunity for employ local people is destroied by multinational companies so crime and poverty are another byproducts. In conclution, multinational companies has many potential benefites, such as solving huge of problems and saving costs witch improve country in many ways, obversly, the drawbacks such as cultural and religious flaws, and likewise, unemployment are so signicicant in people life.
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Nowadayes
, developing
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countries
have variety of
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mutinational
corporations, witch are common. These
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companies
have
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many
benefits for developing
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country
and
also
they
are caused
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some
impediments for local
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people
.

Multinational
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companies
are the main key components of impressive development in several
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countries
. They prompt
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many
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singificant
advantages.
Thankfully
, by recruitment
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many
skilled person around the globe, they can
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solved
a
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normous
amount of problems in their
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company
and
also
in their
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country
by spending a minimum cost. Upbringing
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a
expert employee are
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a
expensive process for them and
also
exploring in local
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people
ma be impossible. By generate venue for
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other
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inernational
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people
from
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other
nation, they can decrease the costs, and
therefore
, they can increase their beneficiaries.
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,
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many
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companies
employ programmers around the words,
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because
they can not find any person in their countries.

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, These
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companies
have
also
had tiny disadvantages.
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, employ
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people
from
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different
culture and religion is the
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fundumental
issue for variety if conflicts between coworkers. They do not inform about
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other
culture and not
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only
for unintended
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behaviour
prompt they
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some
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negative
effects on
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other
person
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but
also
for unknowing about
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other
cultures.
Secondly
, an unavoidable
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consequences
of recruiting
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foriegn
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people
in a
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company
is mass unemployment in the
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country
. The
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oportunity
for employ local
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people
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is
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destroied
by multinational
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companies
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so
crime and poverty are another byproducts.

In
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conclution
, multinational
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companies
has
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many
potential
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benefites
, such as solving huge of problems and saving costs witch
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improve
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country
in
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many
ways,
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obversly
, the drawbacks such as cultural and religious flaws, and
likewise
, unemployment are
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so
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signicicant
in
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people
life.
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IELTS essay Many a person alleges that in retrospect

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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