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In this modern society tourism plays a key role in balancing the economy of a nation moreover it helps the people to get acquainted with the different cultures and their values despite the fact that tourism causes some trouble in place an important role in the prosperity of a nation as well as supporting its cultural heritage I agree to the said statement and the reasons for my opinion are discussed in the following paragraphTo begin with people around the world travel to different countries to see their cultures and to know more about it shortage which in turn boost the local business as many people arrive there when I foreigners visit museums or archaeological sites we could sell and give items to them as well as the tax which is collected from them during the entire visit in the national my place crucial role in balancing the economy for example recent study done by indien Department of tourism shows that there three percentage of global GDP is reduced due to the COVID-19 pandemic effect on tourism. On the other hand environmental issues are and damage to the city's are the main problems Cost to buy tourism and tourist travel around around they carry different things and many throw it away during their journey where is cost by tourism is a huge and it is a serious threat to the environment moreover one more and more people visit archaeological sites and monuments chances of getting damage is high until and unless it is highly protected and limit to the number of visitors to listed in yesterday's Hindu newspaper it was reported that archaeological stag do is damage due to the excessive amount of visitors

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