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in this contemporary era, unimaginable a large amount of wildlife species

in this contemporary era, unimaginable a large amount of wildlife species JVYW0
in this contemporary era, unimaginable a large amount of wildlife species are force into eradition and will soon vanish in the near future through various deleterious reasons. as a result partly of people from community, they are assertion this process are happen naturally, and human unnecessary to safeguard these animals, personally i indubitably discourage this conviction due i believe human play essential role to put wildlife animals to be wipe of. . initially, the quantitative of endangered species has been mitigated unprecedented growth, thus combination from countless factors. firstly, back in times, acients animals are extinction from envrionmental issues through swift of climate change and natural disaster encompasses stunami and earthquake, etc based on some hypothesis of scientists. in recently that circumstance areally reverse due to expanson of population, that mean increasingly demand sources of food, water and living space. which directly posing a serious competition in our planet. consequently, human with extremely demand are able to mass deforestation or over fishing, which progressively leading unblance eco-system and devasting wildlife animal habitats. the second reason worth mentioning to support my idea is that because of profitable numerous companies in diverse fields has ignored moral standard, they released a wide range of harmful contaminant without adequate treatmented into ocean daily, there is the key factor force marine ecosystem degradation, later is disrupt to food chan and living space of ocean species, which consideration the major impact lead them disapperance. therefore, human role in environmental issues and destabilization natural habitats is vitally important. Not only big companies, government in particular contries take accountable in these calamitous phenomenon, but single citizen should engage in cooperation to reduce the adversely impacts to our planet. to be more specific, we invest financial to support preservation wildlife animals, not just for console our mistakes but also for future generations can experience the presence and value of those animals. moreover, a particular animal in wildlife environment they play an important position, so if they no longer exist can actively effect to other species, which boot the vanishing process run quicklier. as a result, human society's and wildlife animal or natural environmental are inextricably linked, we can not existence if other half species in planet extinction, this is co-exist. in conclusion, taking all into consideration, whether government should extinguish to endow support protecting endangered animals or not are still controversial issues. while some people assertion that is unncessary and trivial. i hold firm belive that is essential based on ethic and responsibily to our planet that we living in.
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in
this contemporary era, unimaginable a large amount of
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wildlife
species are force into
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soon
vanish in the near future through various deleterious reasons.
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as
a result partly of
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people
from community, they are assertion this process are
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human
unnecessary to safeguard these
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animals
,
personally
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i
indubitably
discourage this conviction due
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i
believe
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human
play essential role to put
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wildlife
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animals
to be
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of.
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initially
,
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the quantitative of
endangered species has
been mitigated
unprecedented growth,
thus
combination from countless factors.
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firstly
, back in times,
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acients
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animals
are extinction from
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envrionmental
issues through swift of climate
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change
and natural disaster encompasses
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stunami
and earthquake, etc based on
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some
hypothesis of scientists.
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in
recently that circumstance
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areally
reverse due to
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expanson
of population, that mean
increasingly
demand sources of food, water and living space.
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which
directly
posing a serious competition in our planet.
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consequently
,
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human
with
extremely
demand are able to mass deforestation or over fishing, which
progressively
leading
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unblance
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eco-system
and
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devasting
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wildlife
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animal
habitats.
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the
second reason worth mentioning to support my
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idea
is that
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because
of profitable numerous
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companies
in diverse fields has
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ignored
moral standard, they released a wide range of harmful contaminant without adequate
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treatmented
into ocean daily, there is the key factor force marine ecosystem degradation, later is
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disrupt
to food
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chan
and living space of ocean species, which consideration the major impact lead them
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disapperance
.

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therefore
,
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human
role in environmental issues and destabilization natural habitats is
vitally
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important
. Not
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big
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companies
,
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government
in particular
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contries
take accountable in these calamitous phenomenon,
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but
single citizen should engage in cooperation to
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reduce
the
adversely
impacts to our planet.

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to
be more specific, we invest financial to support preservation
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wildlife
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animals
, not
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just
for console our mistakes
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also
for future generations can experience the presence and value of those animals.

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moreover
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animal
in
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wildlife
environment they play an
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important
position,
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so
if they no longer exist can
actively
effect to other species, which boot the vanishing process run
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quicklier
.
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as
a result,
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human
society's and
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wildlife
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animal
or natural environmental are
inextricably
linked, we
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can not existence
if other half species in planet extinction, this is co-exist.

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in
conclusion, taking all into consideration, whether
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government
should extinguish to endow support protecting endangered
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animals
or not are
still
controversial issues.
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while
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some
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assertion
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unncessary
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hold firm
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essential based on ethic and
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responsibily
to our planet that
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we living
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IELTS essay in this contemporary era, unimaginable a large amount of wildlife species

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
421 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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