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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 9WQr
Technology has the greatest value for most of the any individual human being. Clearly, the fundamental role of giving the feedback on the website or on the internet especially quora is to make the other individuals to understand on the product or services that is received from the particular company. Although, certain people are assertain that leaving feedback is a negative, it is completely wrong as it helps people to know about the quality of the product received and also aids buyer in getting better service. On the one hand, giving review is highly important because it makes the human being understand about the product as well as services that is got. As online shopping has been very popular these days, people adore to buy or gift products by checking the customer reviews on the item. The best example is my brother Steve. He had been purchased a numerous products from online specifically brand new phone, cloths, and other electronic gadgets from amazon website, as he is busy with his office work. This can also help in receiving better service from the company. On the other hand, most interesting of giving feedback is to get better customer service. In many cases, people get fake products or the damaged once, in such cases, the obvious choice is to write comment under the product, to which the customer care try to resolve the issue. For instance, recently Steve bought a laptop which had ample of scratchs on the display. So he left a feedback, to which his laptop got replaced in next couple of days. Therefore, leaving feedback on the services or product has a lot of advantages. In conclusion, giving feedback on the website or internet can help both buyers as well as the new customers.
Technology has the greatest value for most of the any individual human being.
Clearly
, the fundamental role of
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giving
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feedback
on the website or on the internet
especially
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quora
is to
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make
the other individuals to understand on the
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product
or
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services
that
is received
from the particular
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company
. Although, certain
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people
are
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assertain
that leaving
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feedback
is a
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negative
, it is completely
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wrong
as it
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helps
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people
to know about the quality of the
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product
received and
also
aids buyer in getting better service.

On the one hand,
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giving
review is
highly
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important
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because
it
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makes
the human being
Consider using a past participle here: "understood".
understand
about the
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product
as well
as
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services
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
. As online shopping has been
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very
popular these days,
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people
adore to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
or gift
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products
by checking the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
reviews on the item. The best example is my brother Steve. He had been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
a numerous
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products
from online
specifically
'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".
brand new
phone, cloths, and other electronic gadgets from
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amazon
website, as he is busy with his office work. This can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in receiving better
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service
from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

On the other hand
, most interesting of
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giving
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feedback
is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
better
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customer
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service
. In
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many
cases,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
fake
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products
or the damaged once, in such cases, the obvious choice is to write comment under the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
, to which the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
care try to resolve the issue.
For instance
, recently Steve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a laptop which had ample of
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scratchs on
the display.
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So
he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
a
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feedback
, to which his laptop
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
replaced in
next
couple of days.
Therefore
, leaving
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feedback
on the
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services
or
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product
has
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a lot of
advantages.

In conclusion
,
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giving
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feedback
on the website or internet can
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help
both buyers
Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.
as well as
the new
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customers
.
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IELTS essay In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
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