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In the world of the internet, people write about a product and its reviews as well as their opinion about the service. Is it a good thing or bad thing?

In the world of the internet, people write about a product and its reviews as well as their opinion about the service. Is it a good thing or bad thing? qBOp
Recently the trend of writing feedback and views about objects or company services is becoming increasingly remarkable in the cyber world. While many could view this as a poor habit, this essay will discuss the reason why I strongly believe that this is a favorable development. To begin with, customers’ reviews posted on the internet are being very aiding in saving money and time for seeking buyers. In other words, with one click and a couple of minutes one could reach many specifications and defects of an item he’s willing to buy, after reading reviews he could decide accordingly whether it’s worth or not. For instance, car companies tend to present their products in a superior look, which could be misleading to customers. Reading feedback quickly could highlight the demerits of the wanted car then it could be judged fairly. Therefore, being valuable, money and time are rescued here. Furthermore, it has been noticed that companies' services have been improved after the invasion of social media and customers’ comments on it. To illustrate more, after seeing how people are being affected by evaluations on social media, companies became more competitive to maintain best quality to keep their customers satisfied. For instance, there is a group community of restaurants on facebook which allocate marks and give a constructive assessment for tried restaurants. It has been noticed that food quality in Lebanon has been ameliorated since owners are taking into consideration these reviews and trying to serve ultimately. Thus, one is served better quality due to the competence that these opinions have done. In conclusion, citizens' comments on the internet should be taken positively due to the fact it helps not to waste money in addition to creating challenges between companies which result in optimum quality for clients.
Recently the trend of writing feedback and views about objects or
company
services is becoming
increasingly
remarkable in the cyber world. While
many
could view this as a poor habit, this essay will discuss the reason why I
strongly
believe that this is a favorable development.

To
begin
with,
customers’
reviews posted on the internet are being
very
aiding in saving money and time for seeking buyers.
In other words
, with one click and a couple of minutes one could reach
many
specifications and defects of an item he’s willing to
buy
, after reading reviews he could decide
accordingly
whether it’s worth or not.
For instance
, car
companies
tend to present their products in a superior look, which could be misleading to
customers
. Reading feedback
quickly
could highlight the demerits of the wanted car then it could
be judged
fairly
.
Therefore
, being valuable, money and time
are rescued
here.

Furthermore
, it has
been noticed
that
companies
' services have been
improved
after the invasion of social media and
customers’
comments on it. To illustrate more, after seeing how
people
are being
affected
by evaluations on social media,
companies
became more competitive to
maintain best
quality
to
keep
their
customers
satisfied.
For instance
, there is a group community of restaurants on
facebook
which allocate marks and give a constructive assessment for tried restaurants. It has
been noticed
that food
quality
in Lebanon has
been ameliorated
since owners are taking into consideration these reviews and trying to serve
ultimately
.
Thus
, one
is served
better
quality
due to the competence that these opinions have done.

In conclusion
, citizens' comments on the internet should
be taken
positively
due to the fact it
helps
not to waste money
in addition
to creating challenges between
companies
which result in optimum
quality
for clients.
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IELTS essay In the world of the internet, people write about a product and its reviews as well as their opinion about the service. Is it a good thing or bad thing?

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