Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

in the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are advanatges and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

in the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are advanatges and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. B9rp
Only around 30 years ago or so, it was hard for people to travel, because of the monetary problems or the difficulties to collect a wide range of documents needed. Nowadays, not only visiting, but living in the other countries are fairly usual and many students decide to take the degree at the foreign universities. However, does this allow them more benefits than drawbacks? Let’s discuss. On the one hand, it happens that the student's home university may be not the best in the world in some fields of study. Hence, students won't be able to obtain the knowledge at the required level and become a highly professional at his future career. That is why students choose the universities with the positive reputation outside their own motherland. On the other hand, some countries, as North Korea, count the living in the different countries as treachery. Leave the home area for studying means to show how bad the teaching is inside. It will result on the popularity of the country and thus, the tourism level. Also, usually, the period of learning at the university lasts from 3 to 7 years and by the time the person will graduate, he will get used to living abroad. Hence, bright and able professionals would forget its motherland, which will lower down its place in international levels even more. In conclusion, I also want to study medicine in the foreign country, because the level of it in my home country is not that high and I wish it was better. For me, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh drawbacks. However, I do want the students to come back and help their home countries even in every way.
Only
around 30 years ago or
so
, it was
hard
for
people
to travel,
because
of the monetary problems or the difficulties to collect a wide range of documents needed. Nowadays, not
only
visiting,
but
living in the other
countries
are
fairly
usual and
many
students
decide to take the degree at the foreign
universities
.
However
, does this
allow
them more benefits than drawbacks?
Let
’s discuss.

On the one hand, it happens that the student's home
university
may be not the best in the world in
some
fields of study.
Hence
,
students
won't be able to obtain the knowledge at the required
level
and become a
highly
professional at his future career.
That is
why
students
choose the
universities
with the
positive
reputation outside their
own
motherland.

On the other hand
,
some
countries
, as North Korea, count the living in the
different
countries
as treachery.
Leave
the home area for studying means to
show
how
bad
the teaching is inside. It will result on the popularity of the
country
and
thus
, the tourism
level
.
Also
,
usually
, the period of learning at the
university
lasts from 3 to 7 years and by the time the person will graduate, he will
get
used
to living abroad.
Hence
, bright and able professionals would forget its motherland, which will lower down its place in international
levels
even more.

In conclusion
, I
also
want to study medicine in the foreign
country
,
because
the
level
of it in my home
country
is not that high and I wish it was better. For me, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh drawbacks.
However
, I do want the
students
to
come
back and
help
their home
countries
even in every way.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay in the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are advanatges and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts