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In the past employees worked in small business. Nowadays most employees work in bigger businesses. Do working in bigger business have more advantagees or not? Write ans with eg.

In the past employees worked in small business. Nowadays most employees work in bigger businesses. Do working in bigger business have more advantagees or not? Write ans with eg. Kw3dR
Most people in modern era are emplyed in lagre organizations comparative to small scale industries in past. I find that these have more advantagees because they not only provide better allowance to eomployees but also provde job security. Bigger companies provide beeter allowances to people. Reason being they have more turnover and geneate higher profite, so Human resource department of these companies provide benefits to their staff such as transport allowance and seasonal bonus. Moreover, people get incentives based on performance of company. Had the companies not generated so much profi, there would be no additional bonuses for employee. In addition to the aforementioned advantages, these provide job security. To elaborate more, these companies are experienced in Market strategies and not affected by market recessions. Thus there are less chances of people getting fired. As evidence, Reliance industries and Tata Groups did not decunt number of employee during COVID situation. Thus individuals are keen to work in such industries. To recapitulate, they provide extra bonuses besides job secuities. Therefore, I am convinced that there are more advantages of these businees than small businesses.
Most
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people
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in
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lagre
organizations comparative to
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small
scale industries
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in past
. I find that these have more
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advantagees
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they not
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only
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provide
better allowance to
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eomployees
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but
also
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provde
job security.

Bigger
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companies
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provide
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beeter
allowances to
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people
. Reason being they have more turnover and
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geneate
higher
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profite
,
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so
Human resource department of these
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companies
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provide
benefits to their staff such as transport allowance and seasonal bonus.
Moreover
,
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people
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get
incentives based on performance of
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company
. Had the
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companies
not generated
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so
much
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profi
, there would be no additional bonuses for employee.

In addition
to the aforementioned advantages, these
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provide
job security. To elaborate more, these
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companies
are experienced
in Market strategies and not
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affected
by market recessions.
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Thus
there are
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less
chances of
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people
getting fired. As evidence, Reliance industries and Tata Groups did not
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decunt
number of employee during
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COVID
situation.
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Thus
individuals are keen to work in such industries.

To recapitulate, they
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provide
extra bonuses
besides
job
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secuities
.
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, I
am convinced
that there are more advantages of these
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businees
than
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small
businesses.
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IELTS essay In the past employees worked in small business. Nowadays most employees work in bigger businesses. Do working in bigger business have more advantagees or not? Write ans with eg.

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