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In the letter to the editorial, the author has claimed that unmanned missions to space should be opted rather than manned missions.

In the letter to the editorial, the author has claimed that unmanned missions to space should be opted rather than manned missions. Dl3M6
In the letter to the editorial, the author has claimed that unmanned missions to space should be opted rather than manned missions. The author states his recommendation by citing the previous success of the unmanned space process and by saying that manned space flight more costly and dangerous. However, the author has taken various vague assumptions to defend his positions which is described in the following three paragraphs. First of all, the author has claimed that manned space flights are costly and dangerous without providing any evidence or source of the same. It can be very much possible that, in reality the manned space program is carried out very much care with maximum priority given to the safety of the astronauts. Moreover, it highly possible that the cost associated to both manned and unmanned missions are similar with only minor differences because of the safety costs related to the astronauts. Thus, if any of these is true then the argument is highly weaned. Secondly, the author states that unmanned spaces programs have gathered some great useful information. However, the data gathered by the unmanned mission does not convey that they are bringing superior information as compared to the other. It is very much possible that though the information gathered by unmanned flights are useful, however, they are nothing as compared to the manned flights. Also, if there is any risk associated with sending men and women to space, the eventual results from those steps can be very much useful as they will be able to carry out various experiments in the space which is not possbile in the absence of human. Thus, if any of these hods water then the argument presented by author is highly weakned. Finally, the claims of spending our resources in unmanned space flight. The author cites this reason by stating that unmanned missions are risk free and can gather informations as well. However, as per the reasons provided above, it can be seen that many of the argument of the author depends on many unwarrented assumptions such that manned misisons can be much superior to unmanned mission leading to the claim of investing the resources in unmanned space flight much weakned. In conclusion, the author beleive that we should invest our resources in unmanned flight. However, the author's claim is based on several unwarranted assumptions. Thus, although unmanned misisons may seem less dangerous and costly, spending the resources on it is not recommended.
In the letter to the editorial, the
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author
has claimed that unmanned missions to
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space
should
be opted
rather
than
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manned
missions. The
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author
states his recommendation by citing the previous success of the unmanned
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space
process and by saying that
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manned
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space
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flight
more costly and
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dangerous
.
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, the
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author
has taken various vague assumptions to defend his positions which is
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described
in the following three paragraphs.

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First of all
, the
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author
has claimed that
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manned
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space
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flights
are costly and
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dangerous
without providing any evidence or source of the same. It can be
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very
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possible that, in reality the
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manned
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space
program
is carried
out
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care with maximum priority
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given
to the safety of the astronauts.
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, it
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possible that the cost associated to both
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manned
and unmanned missions are similar with
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only
minor differences
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of the safety costs related to the astronauts.
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, if any of these is true then the argument is
highly
weaned.

Secondly
, the
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author
states that unmanned
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spaces
programs have gathered
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some
great useful
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information
.
However
, the data gathered by the unmanned mission does not convey that they are bringing superior
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information
as compared to the other. It is
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very
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much
possible that though the
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information
gathered by unmanned
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flights
are useful,
however
, they are nothing as compared to the
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flights
.
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, if there is any
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risk
associated with sending
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men
and women to
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, the eventual results from those steps can be
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useful as they will be able to carry out various experiments in the
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space
which is not
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possbile
in the absence of human.
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, if any of these hods water then the argument presented by
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is
highly
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weakned
.

Finally
, the claims of spending our resources in unmanned
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space
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flight
. The
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author
cites this reason by stating that unmanned missions are
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risk
free and can gather
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informations
as well
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that
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of the argument of the
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depends on
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unwarrented
assumptions such that
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misisons
can be
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much
superior to unmanned mission leading to the claim of investing the resources in unmanned
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space
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flight
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much
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weakned
.

In conclusion
, the
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beleive
that we should invest our resources in unmanned
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flight
.
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, the author's claim
is based
on several unwarranted assumptions.
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, although unmanned
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misisons
may seem less
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and costly, spending the resources on it is not recommended.
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IELTS essay In the letter to the editorial, the author has claimed that unmanned missions to space should be opted rather than manned missions.

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408 words
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