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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? pQLD

in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? In this globalization situation anything is possible to do which even can reach only in one hand, such activity like gathering information will be easier way to do through ebooks or surfing the internet. But in my personal opinion, printed information on newspaper will give us more advantages and must be kept on our socialization. To begin with,

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in
 the future, nobody will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 printed newspaper or book This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what Did you mean the noun "extent"?extent
extend
 do you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 or disagree with this statement?

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only
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easier
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ebooks
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But
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must
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kept
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begin
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IELTS essay in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

92 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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