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in the early 21st century, the proportion of the world's population living in the cities has increased substantially. People have moved in ever growing numbers from rural to urban areas. As migration from rural areas to cities countries, it is inevitable that infrastructure in these cities will collapse. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

in the early 21st century, the proportion of the world's population living in the cities has increased substantially. People have moved in ever growing numbers from rural to urban areas. As migration from rural areas to cities countries, it is inevitable that infrastructure in these cities will collapse. with this statement A2jx

Every year, thousands of people leave their countryside houses to settle in urban centers either within the country or across borders. Some people take this step with the intention of improving their lifestyle whereas, others seek migration when they suffer from a natural or man-made disaster. There are various reasons for the occurrence of rural-urban migration and the problems associated with it. Most of the people who live in pastoral areas are self-employed in agriculture and farming. With changing climatic conditions, agricultural productivity and farmer’s financial security are greatly affected. The city life not only provides countryside people with better job opportunities but also with superior educational facilities thereby compelling people migrate towards conurbation. Though rural-urban migration can prove to be advantageous from an individual’s perspective, there are some drawbacks that society has to deal with. With an increased rate of migration taking place, there are negative effects on the agricultural industry of a country because the rural development does not materialize. Having a large population in the cities leads to pressure on the natural resources and the services (health and education) of urban areas. Most importantly, due to the high illiteracy rate in rural areas, people are not suitable for better quality jobs and they end up living in slum areas. To sum up, rural-urban migration is increasing at an alarming rate. I think the government should take action like providing better employment and services in rural areas so that the countrymen do not feel the need to continuously drift to urban centers.

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people
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leave
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houses
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Some
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people
 take this step with the intention of improving their lifestyle whereas, others seek You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflighttransferjourneyshiftexodusmovement
migration
 when they suffer from a natural or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made disaster. There are various reasons for the occurrence of rural-urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflighttransferjourneyshiftexodusmovement
migration
 and the problems associated with it.

Most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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live
 in pastoral You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 are self-employed in agriculture and farming. With changing climatic conditions, agricultural productivity and farmer’s financial security are greatly
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affected
. The city life not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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people
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but
also
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people
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migration
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some
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has to
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migration
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negative
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because
 the rural development does not materialize. Having a large population in the cities leads to pressure on the natural resources and the services (health and education) of urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. Most importantly
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areas
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people
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 up living in slum areas.

To sum up, rural-urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflighttransferjourneyshiftexodusmovement
migration
 is increasing at an alarming rate. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should take action like providing better employment and services in rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
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so
 that the countrymen do not feel the need to continuously
 drift to urban centers. 