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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.why is this the case?what can be done about this problem?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem? 0Al69
People living in the world are still struggling to find food to eat, even in the midst growth of agriculture. There are several problems behind this case. Mismanagement of government and food controlling department is the main issue. Firstly, an improper way of collecting food and storing is not implemented. Corporate companies take all responsibility for it. They collected from farmers at low cost and stored at their godown. Apparently, farmers who cultivate these crops will not get that much amount. They will lose the profit. instead, cooperate company got profit by increasing amount. Secondly, the government does not take any necessary steps for food collection. Government has a significant role in food control. for helping multinational companies, government eradicate farmers policy in the cabinet without the presence of public. The way of implementation for better agriculture and selling sustainably plummeted. By reducing the price of food is the only solution for it. Introducing proper price tag for every food items and implement it throughout the countries. Controlling price variations dependent on economic status. however, making a local market for farmers, throughout that, buye and seller can easily do the business. To conclude, the intervention of coperative companies are detrimental to society. They merely look for the profit not for growth the public. Goverment interaction for this case is inevitable.
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living in the world are
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food
to eat, even in the midst growth of agriculture. There are several problems behind this case. Mismanagement of
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government
and
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food
controlling department is the main issue.
Firstly
, an improper way of collecting
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food
and storing is not implemented. Corporate
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companies
take all responsibility for it. They collected from
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farmers
at low cost and stored at their
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godown
.
Apparently
,
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farmers
who cultivate these crops will not
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get
that much amount. They will lose the profit.
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instead
, cooperate
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company
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got
profit by increasing amount.
Secondly
, the
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government
does not take any necessary steps for
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food
collection.
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Government
has a significant role in
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food
control.
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for
helping multinational
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companies
,
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government
eradicate
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farmers
policy in the cabinet without the presence of public. The way of implementation for better agriculture and selling
sustainably
plummeted. By reducing the price of
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food
is the
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only
solution for it. Introducing proper price tag for every
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food
items and implement it throughout the countries. Controlling price variations dependent on economic status.
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however
, making a local market for
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farmers
, throughout that,
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buye
and seller can
easily
do the business.
To conclude
, the intervention of
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coperative
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companies
are detrimental to society. They
merely
look for the profit not for growth the public.
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Goverment
interaction for this case is inevitable.

IELTS essay In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

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220 words
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