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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve if they tried hard enough.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve if they tried hard enough. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Ng7m

It is always said that, the younger generations does not have any limits and they can able to attain anything if they are ready to push their limits. This essay looks into several advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon. The main advantage of the children getting forced from their parents to achieve a particular task was their improved performance and their increased dedication. The children who listens their motivating words from their guardians tends to show a magnificent level of performance because they are not getting distracted towards any other things but only concentrating towards their hardwork to achieve a goal. In their mindset, there was no limits and they are thinking that their hardwork will be paid off. The motivation of parents also improves their attitude towards attaining something. They will become ready to go harder and harder on their journey to success despite of all other challenges. The main disadvantage of the parents enforcement of their children to the accomplishment of various tasks will leads to the lack of their physical and mental health. The children who are prone to hear the need for Completion of a particular thing from their parents everyday tend to work harder despite of thinking about their physical wellness. They may not be interested to take a balanced diet that is essential for their growth needs. They will also exhibit a great mental agitation, as their minds was only concentrated on the achievement of the task told by their parents. This will lack them on their social and personal abilities. In a nutshell, the future generations will be greatly benefitted from their parents motivation to push their limits by exhibiting premium levels of performance and their increased dedicstion towards task completion. But it may affect their overall physical and mental wellness in a dangerous manner.

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 all other challenges.

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Completion of a particular thing from their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
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everyday
 tend to work harder Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?despite
despite of
 thinking about their physical wellness. They may not be interested
 to take a balanced diet that is
 essential for their growth needs. They will also
 exhibit a great mental agitation, as their minds was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 concentrated on the achievement of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyfunctionbusinessundertakingworkproject
task
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told
 by their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
. This will lack them on their social and personal abilities.

In a nutshell, the future generations will be greatly
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benefitted
 from their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
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 by exhibiting premium levels of performance and their increased Possible spelling mistake found.dedication
dedicstion
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task
 completion. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it may affect their overall
 physical and mental wellness in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
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 manner. 