It is commonly believed that, by working hard children can reach the pinnacle of success. Although there are lots of merits and demerits. In the below passages I am going to discuss both.
On the one hand, at the young stage of every child has tended to be good dreamer. As a result, they want to accomplish their dreams. By motivating them to do work persistently, younger are motived to do enormous things, they can segregate themselves to others. Such things make them excel their future career and stir up to focus on main objectives instead wondering to search better option. More importantly, by the accomplishment of a single dream, it would be encouraging them to take another step to culmination. Thus, this can inspire them to do any work patiently, persistently and more precisely.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that, failing to achieve dreams, sometimes demotivate to someone. Because not all student is same as aforementioned types. Student feel dispassionate, uninterested and impassive after a drastic fail. They fail to stand up straight after unsuccessful work because they thing their effort was not far enough to get for achievement. This can be exemplified by children who study all the time because they want to be top students and suffer from mental health issues such as depression, anxiety, and isolation.
To conclude, although it is beneficial to tell children that working hard towards a goal always yields positive results, it can cause them issues such as frustration and burnout.
It is
commonly
believed that, by working
hard
children can reach the pinnacle of success. Although there are lots of merits and demerits. In the below passages I am going to discuss both.
On the one hand, at the young stage of every child has tended to be
good
dreamer.
As a result
, they want to accomplish their dreams. By motivating them to do work
persistently
, younger are
motived
to do enormous things, they can segregate themselves to others. Such things
make
them excel their future career and stir up to focus on main objectives
instead
wondering to search better option. More
importantly
, by the accomplishment of a single dream, it would be encouraging them to take another step to culmination.
Thus
, this can inspire them to do any work
patiently
,
persistently
and more
precisely
.
On the other hand
, it is inevitable that, failing to achieve dreams,
sometimes
demotivate to someone.
Because
not all student is same as aforementioned types. Student
feel
dispassionate, uninterested and impassive after a drastic fail. They fail to stand up straight after unsuccessful work
because
they
thing
their effort was not far
enough
to
get
for achievement. This can
be exemplified
by children who study all the time
because
they want to be top students and suffer from mental health issues such as depression, anxiety, and isolation.
To conclude
, although it is beneficial to
tell
children that working
hard
towards a goal always yields
positive
results, it can cause them issues such as frustration and burnout.