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In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit, while some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both points of view and give your own point of view

In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit, while some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both points of view and give your own point of view 15o1q

financial aids have been given to jobless multitudes which offers them a consolidate livelihood in some nations. However some people are not standing in the support of such system. This essay will intend to articulate the both notions along with my point of view. Initiating with the former phenomenon; there are exacerbate categories of unemployed individuals with dissimmilar causes. The handicapped one either physically or mentally would benefit from monetary assistance of government since they could no longer help themselves without relying on others. In addition, those poor single parents would need extra income to properly look after their children as they might be the sole breadwinner. Hence, they may not have the time to work for longer hours and thus earnings more money as they have to take care of the kids. On the contrary side, majority of jobless people have been abusing the money to purchase drugs or alcohol and disturb the ambience by commiting unethical activities such as, rape and murder. Besides, somehow masses marely depend on the aids which leads them to become unmotivated to search for placement. Consequently, in this way dwellers always neglect the adoptation of self-reliant, be a independent worker. To recapitulate, few citizens genuienly requires the money to improve their lives. Executives should probably need to set a strict criteria to deselect those group of populace for the benefits.

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financial
 aids have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to jobless multitudes which offers them After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'consolidate' is correct. If 'consolidate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a consolidate
 livelihood in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 nations. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are not standing in the support of such system. This essay will intend to articulate the both notions along with my point of view.

Initiating with the former phenomenon; there are exacerbate categories of unemployed individuals with Possible spelling mistake found.dissimilar
dissimmilar
 causes. The handicapped one either physically
 or mentally would benefit from monetary assistance of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 since they could no longer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 themselves without relying on others. In addition
, those poor single parents would need extra income to properly
 look after their children as they might be the sole breadwinner. Hence
, they may not have the time to work for longer hours and thus
 earnings more money as they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take care of the kids.

On the contrary
 side, It seems that an article is missing.the majority of
majority of
 jobless This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have been abusing the money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 drugs or alcohol and disturb the ambience by Possible spelling mistake found.committingcommuting
commiting
 unethical activities such as, rape and murder. Besides
, somehow masses Possible spelling mistake found.earlymainlynearlyrarelyMarymerely
marely
 depend on the aids which leads them to become unmotivated to search for placement. Consequently
, in this way dwellers always neglect the Possible spelling mistake found.adaptation
adoptation
 of self-reliant, be Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 independent worker.

To recapitulate, few citizens Possible spelling mistake found.genuinely
genuienly
 requires the money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. Executives should probably
 need to set a strict Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "criterion"?criterion
criteria
 to deselect those group of populace for the benefits. 