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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 6xLd3
Rubbish management problem is one of the major problems of concern for the world leader s. It is increasing rapidly by creating a huge problem in the environment including water pollution, air pollution and soil pollution, although it can be solved by taking essential measures but It cannot be totally solved due to the lackings of scientific technology. Firstly, population of the world is increasing naturally. Modern people lead a very luxurious lifestyle which is ultimately dangerous for the environment. Because of the advancement of science and technology, many labour saving devices are invented for simplifying the daily life. So, people are becoming more dependent on the devices. As a result, the number of mill-factories has been increased and the industries are creating rubbish everyday and throw it into the rivers and water ways. Secondly, present era is driven by a throw-away consumerism with companies and producers striving to maximize profits by producing one-time use products without prioritizing on reuse, recycling or the use of environmentally friendly materials. Finally, these all creates excessive pressure on the environment. The plastic material release harmful chemicals into the soil and water. Ocean plastic is estimated to kill millions of marine animals every years. To solve this problem, government should take essential measures. Recycling of many products including plastics, aluminum and copper. Boycotting plastic bottles and introduce the alternative for plastic. Encouraging people to buy things with less packaging and use the jute bags. By implementing these strategies, we can hope to solve this problem partially.
Rubbish management
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problem
is one of the major
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problems
of concern for the world leader s. It is increasing
rapidly
by creating a huge
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problem
in the environment including water pollution, air pollution and soil pollution, although it can
be solved
by taking essential measures
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but
It cannot be
totally
solved due to the
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lackings
of scientific technology.

Firstly
, population of the world is increasing
naturally
. Modern
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people
lead a
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very
luxurious lifestyle which is
ultimately
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dangerous
for the environment.
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Because
of the advancement of science and technology,
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many
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labour saving
devices
are invented
for simplifying the daily life.
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So
,
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people
are becoming more dependent on the devices.
As a result
, the number of mill-factories has
been increased
and the industries are creating rubbish
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everyday
and throw it into the rivers and water ways.
Secondly
, present era
is driven
by a throw-away consumerism with
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companies
and producers striving to maximize profits by producing one-time
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use
products without prioritizing on reuse, recycling or the
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use
of
environmentally
friendly materials.
Finally
, these all creates excessive pressure on the environment. The
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plastic
material release harmful chemicals into the soil and water. Ocean
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plastic
is estimated
to kill millions of marine animals every
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years
. To solve this
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problem
,
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government
should take essential measures. Recycling of
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many
products including
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plastics
, aluminum and copper. Boycotting
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plastic
bottles and introduce the alternative for
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plastic
. Encouraging
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people
to
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buy
things with less packaging and
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use
the jute bags. By implementing these strategies, we can hope to solve this
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problem
partially
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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