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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people earn.

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people earn. PVM3K
In a number of countries, a small number of people obtain very high salaries. Few people think that this is good for a nation, while others think that the government should control salaries and check the amount people gain by labour. In my opinion I strongly believe that higher salaries to a few executives contribute to a nation's development and company's profits. Google, for instance, has become the largest organisation in terms of revenue and profits only by hiring smart employees.
In a number of countries, a
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should control salaries and
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In my opinion I
strongly
believe that higher salaries to a few executives contribute to a nation's development and
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's profits. Google,
for instance
, has become the largest
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only
by hiring smart employees.

IELTS essay In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people earn.

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81 words
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