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In recent years,online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomena. Use specific detail & examples to explain.

Nowadays, there is an increase in trend of distance learning. Several people believe that this method has a total of positive impacts and it will alter conventional education while others say that it is impossible to eliminate brick and mortal classroom. In this essay i will discuss both views and give my opinion. To begin with, there are some advantages in attending virtual classroom. Frist and fore most is time consuming for both schools and students. Pupils get education at anytime and any where. In terms of teachers they can deliver a lesson to all students by making video. Secondly, online classes save costs of developing facilities such as campus and library. E -learning education provides opportunities for those students who live far from university. On the other hand, face to face education plays an integral part in education. Interactive learning is more effective than online learning. In detailed, when discussing about one topic teachers can give some feedback and more attention on students. Teachers can rectify mistakes and improve there errors. In conclusion, although there was a bunch of advantages of online learning brings, I strongly believe that traditional education is good teaching method which is irreplaceable.
Nowadays, there is an increase in trend of distance
learning
. Several
people
believe that this method has a total of
positive
impacts and
it will alter conventional
education
while others say that it is impossible to eliminate brick and mortal classroom. In this essay
i
will discuss both views and give my opinion. To
begin
with, there are
some
advantages in attending virtual classroom.
Frist
and
fore most
is
time consuming
for both schools and
students
. Pupils
get
education
at anytime and
any where
. In terms of teachers they can deliver a lesson to all
students
by making video.
Secondly
, online classes save costs of developing facilities such as campus and library. E
-learning
education
provides opportunities for those
students
who
live
far from university.
On the other hand
, face to face
education
plays an integral part in
education
. Interactive
learning
is more effective than online
learning
. In detailed, when
discussing about one
topic teachers can give
some
feedback and more attention on
students
. Teachers can rectify mistakes and
improve
there
errors.
In conclusion
, although there was a bunch of advantages of online
learning
brings, I
strongly
believe that traditional
education
is
good
teaching method which is irreplaceable.
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IELTS essay In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomena. Use specific detail & examples to explain.

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