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In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak this language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is indeed that language is a first path for expressing any thought in conversation. Meanwhile, for learning a language in better way it is mandatory to get knowledge about that nation, tradition and lifestyle of that particular region's individuals who are native speakers of that language. I agree with this statement up to great extent that is discussed below. To embark with, if adults have information about rules and regulations of other country then it can be fruitful for the economic success of country by exporting and importing business. At the same time, it may helpful for surviving and settling in that particular region for inhabitants. For instance, thousands of students visit foreign countries for their study purposes. Hence, if they have early knowledge about that area then they cannot break rules and do not suffer from obstacles. Apart from this, knowledge regarding culture is an essential for learning a language. Whereas, it assistance for improving verbal skills and experience with different cultures which gives satisfaction to humans and by adopting these traditions a person can make good reputation in society. To illustrate, wedding tradition is different in all religions. To reinforce my view point, if we know about foreigner's lifestyle it can be crucial for doing further business because people come to know about their actual taste and automatically it reduces the chances of errors in their work. To exemplify, for opening a hotel customer preference is significant. On the other hand, no one can deny the fact that if inhabitants have vast knowledge about other countries then they can forget to their roots. As a result, they will switch towards western society. Consequently, younger generation unable to connect with their real heritage. To conclude, although learn about other country's tradition and lifestyles of people is convenient for survival in that nation however the importance of their own language and Nation cannot be forgetful.
It is
indeed
that
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language
is a
first
path for expressing any
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thought
in conversation. Meanwhile, for learning a
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language
in better way it is mandatory to
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get
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knowledge
about that nation,
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tradition
and lifestyle of that particular region's individuals who are native speakers of that
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language
. I
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agree
with this statement up to great extent that
is discussed
below. To embark with, if adults have information about
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rules
and regulations of
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other
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country
then it can be fruitful for the economic success of
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country
by exporting and importing business. At the same time, it
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may helpful
for surviving and settling in that particular region for inhabitants.
For instance
, thousands of students visit foreign
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countries
for their study purposes.
Hence
, if they have early
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knowledge
about that area then they cannot break
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rules
and do not suffer from obstacles. Apart from this,
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knowledge
regarding culture is an essential for learning a
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language
. Whereas,
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it assistance
for improving verbal
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skills
and experience with
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different
cultures which gives satisfaction to humans and by adopting these
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traditions
a person can
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make
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good
reputation in society. To illustrate, wedding
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tradition
is
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different
in all religions. To reinforce my view point, if we know about foreigner's lifestyle it can be crucial for doing
further
business
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because
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people
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come
to know about their actual taste and
automatically
it
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reduces
the chances of errors in their work.
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To
exemplify, for opening a hotel customer preference is significant. On the
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other
hand, no one can deny the fact that if inhabitants have vast
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knowledge
about
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other
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countries
then they can forget to their roots.
As a result
, they will switch towards western society.
Consequently
, younger generation unable to connect with their real heritage.
To conclude
, although learn about
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other
country's
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tradition
and lifestyles of
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people
is convenient for survival in that nation
however
the importance of their
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own
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language
and Nation cannot be forgetful.
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IELTS essay In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak this language. with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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