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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this? BRWw
The reduction in the quality of the air and water are a few of the causes of Global Warming. With the desire to become a superpower just like other countries, developing countries also knowingly participate in the same vie and hence compromises the quality of the necessary elements such as Air, Water, Environment, etc. There are many causes for the reduction in the air and water quality and so are solutions which are described below. Firstly, to boost up the industrialization and development government in the developing countries come up with numerous schemes, and asks greedy people to invest more and more time and effort to be more superior. Also, there is no one who monetizes the flow of hazardous chemicals, pesticides into the river and air. For example, it is believed that in developing countries like India the air in New Delhi will be more polluted which will end up as the lowest in the Air Pollution Index in the World. A similar scenario is for the rivers as well. The government has developed a Pollution Control Board to supervise the emission of the insoluble substances from the chemical & infra sites leads to irreversible pollution of the water. This not only leads to non-drinkable water for humans but also puts the lives of marine creatures in danger. Take an example of Yamuna river water getting spoiled after emission of the industrial hard water into the river. Thousands of lives in rural areas are dependent on this river water. However, the quality of the air can be improved with efforts in the right direction. Strict penalties against the offenders who pollute air or water above predefined limits. Regular surprise checking at the sites of these industries can help a lot to reduce the waste and chemical emission resulting in the improvement of air and water. Incentive schemes for those organizations who obey the defined Pollution Control Board’s regulations. To conclude, we can say that indeed development is required for everyone but if it is done by affecting nature at minimal level then the air and water which are actually necessities of the human hood will be maintained which is right now taken for granted. Because there no other mother earth to live.
The reduction in the
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of the
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air
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water
are a few of the causes of Global Warming. With the desire to become a superpower
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just
like other
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countries
, developing
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countries
also
knowingly
participate in the same vie and
hence
compromises the
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quality
of the necessary elements such as
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Air
,
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Water
, Environment, etc. There are
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many
causes for the reduction in the
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air
and
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water
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quality
and
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so
are solutions which are
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described
below.

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, to boost up the industrialization and development
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government
in the developing
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countries
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come
up with numerous schemes, and asks greedy
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people
to invest more and more time and effort to be more superior.
Also
, there is no one who monetizes the flow of hazardous chemicals, pesticides into the
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river
and
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air
.
For example
, it
is believed
that in developing
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countries
like India the
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air
in New Delhi will be more polluted which will
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end
up as the lowest in the
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Air
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Pollution
Index in the World.

A similar scenario is for the
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rivers
as well
. The
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government
has developed a
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Pollution
Control Board to supervise the emission of the insoluble substances from the chemical & infra sites leads to irreversible
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pollution
of the
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water
. This not
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only
leads to non-drinkable
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water
for humans
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but
also
puts the
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lives
of marine creatures in
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danger
. Take an example of
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Yamuna
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river
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water
getting spoiled after emission of the industrial
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hard
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water
into the
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river
. Thousands of
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lives
in rural areas are dependent on this
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river
water.

However
, the
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quality
of the
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air
can be
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improved
with efforts in the right direction. Strict penalties against the offenders who pollute
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air
or
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water
above predefined limits. Regular surprise checking at the sites of these industries can
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help
a lot to
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reduce
the waste and chemical emission resulting in the improvement of
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air
and
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water
. Incentive schemes for those organizations who obey the defined
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Pollution
Control Board’s regulations.

To conclude
, we can say that
indeed
development
is required
for everyone
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but
if it
is done
by affecting nature at minimal level then the
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air
and
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water
which are actually necessities of the human hood will
be maintained
which is right
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now
taken for granted.
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Because
there no other mother earth to
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live
.
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IELTS essay In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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