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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified.

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. pVe3
In many nations, smoking has been banned in public areas and many men and women believe that it has a justification. This essay completely agrees with that statement because it affects the work environment and it reduces dangerous accidents. The primary reason why making it illegal to smoke near office spaces and restaurants is justified is that it impacts negatively on the surroundings of a job. This is because of smoke particles that come from cigarettes, which is not common for non-smokers to experience, moreover, they feel uncomfortable mainly who had health issues related to breathing. As a result, not allowing smokers to smoke in those areas allows other people to work safely. For example, in the United Kingdom, to not to have any disturbance for their employees while providing their service, many restaurant owners do not allow their customers to smoke in their pubs. Another reason for the prohibition of smoking in public places is essential is that it lowers major accidents that it causes from fire. If smokers are not cautious of their used cigarettes while disposing of, it may lighten up gradually and explode which affects a large number of public's lives. Therefore, it should be banned in areas where common people move regularly because it will not result in a huge loss for government properties and business. For example, in India, in cinema halls and airports, citizens are not allowed to smoke in or nearby those places, to mitigate the risk of fire accidents. In conclusion, I strongly agree that in a large number of countries, smoking is ban in public areas and it is justified for many people because it causes negative impacts on the workplace and it reduces unfortunate incidents.
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nations, smoking has
been banned
in public
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areas
and
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many
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men
and women believe that it has a justification. This essay completely
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agrees
with that statement
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because
it affects the work environment and it
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reduces
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dangerous
accidents.

The primary reason why making it illegal to
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smoke
near office spaces and restaurants
is justified
is that it impacts
negatively
on the surroundings of a job. This is
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because
of
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smoke
particles that
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come
from cigarettes, which is not common for non-smokers to experience,
moreover
, they feel uncomfortable
mainly
who had health issues related to breathing.
As a result
, not allowing smokers to
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smoke
in those
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areas
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allows
other
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people
to work
safely
.
For example
, in the United Kingdom,
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to not to
have any disturbance for their employees while providing their service,
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many
restaurant owners do not
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allow
their customers to
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smoke
in their pubs.

Another reason for the prohibition of smoking in public places is essential is that it lowers major accidents that it causes from fire. If smokers are not cautious of their
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used
cigarettes while disposing of, it may lighten up
gradually
and explode which affects
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a large number of
public's
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lives
.
Therefore
, it should
be banned
in
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areas
where common
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people
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move
regularly
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because
it will not result in a huge loss for
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government
properties and business.
For example
, in India, in cinema halls and airports, citizens are not
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allowed
to
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smoke
in or nearby those places, to mitigate the
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risk
of fire accidents.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
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agree
that in
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a large number of
countries, smoking is ban in public
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areas
and it
is justified
for
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many
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people
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because
it causes
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negative
impacts on the workplace and it
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reduces
unfortunate incidents.
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IELTS essay In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified.

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