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In a number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on railways but believe that spent on improving existing public transport

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on railways but believe that spent on improving existing public transport RNj9p
Most of the masses feel the need that money should be invested for constructed a new railway path, which is essential in several countries for quick service between urban areas Whereas, Remaining believe amount should be only spent for betterment of local transport services such as buses. Consequently, For developing nations, Fast vehicles like trains might more preferable in modern era. I will discuss both perspectives and give my views in subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand, There are numerous reasons for developing the tracks, First and foremost is, Trains are more faster and convenient for travel. To explain it, It is well known that mankind have hectic schedules by they do not have much time for travelling to others cities in two or three hours, so it is reliable for them to go anywhere in some time. Apart from this, due to the range of travellers the cost is also very less than other transports. For example, In the London the survey revealed that daily 55% of people travel by a metro to far away regions. As a result, It reduce the time which waste in travelling and expenses of daily routine. On the other hand, It is not deniable that local vehicles is also plays a crucial part in humans life, as it is necessary to go to a local places. To elaborate it, Masses do not often to outside their towns they only travel under their sites which is in 20-30 km. Consequently, if the maximum roads developed people can easily go anywhere and it cannot even take much cost for some children and women. For instance, the Indian Administration made a rule for ladies to provided them free bus service in Government buses. Hence, it is affordable for feminine and for go to near by places. In conclusion, I would say that railways are the sign of development so major cost might be spent on making tracks. However, Public facilities should not be denied like free, less money taking as well as fast services.
Most of the masses feel the need that money should
be invested
for constructed a new railway path, which is essential in several countries for quick
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
between urban areas Whereas, Remaining believe amount should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
spent for betterment of local transport
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
such as buses.
Consequently
, For developing nations,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Fast
vehicles like trains might more preferable in modern era. I will discuss both perspectives and give my views in subsequent paragraphs.

On the one hand, There are numerous reasons for developing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tracks
,
First
and foremost is, Trains are
Use only "faster" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more faster
and convenient for travel. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
it, It is well known that mankind have hectic schedules by they do not have much time for travelling to others cities in two or three hours,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it is reliable for them to go anywhere in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time. Apart from this, due to the range of
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travellers
the cost is
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
less than other transports.
For example
, In the London the survey revealed that daily 55% of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
travel by a metro to far away regions.
As a result
, It
Did you mean "reduces"?
reduce
the time which waste in travelling and expenses of daily routine.

On the other hand
, It is not deniable that local vehicles is
also
plays a crucial part in humans life, as it is necessary to go to a local places. To elaborate it, Masses do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
to outside their towns they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
travel under their sites which is in 20-30 km.
Consequently
, if the maximum roads developed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can
easily
go anywhere and it cannot even take much cost for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
children and women.
For instance
, the Indian Administration made a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
for ladies to provided them free bus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
buses.
Hence
, it is affordable for feminine and for
There isn't usually a preposition before "near". Did you mean "go near"?
go to near
by places.

In conclusion
, I would say that railways are the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
of development
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
major cost might
be spent
on making
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tracks
.
However
, Public facilities should not
be denied
like free, less money taking
as well
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
.
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IELTS essay In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on railways but believe that spent on improving existing public transport

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