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Impact of COVID-19 on the Education of Students.

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Due to the outbreak of coronavirus, known as COVID-19, in late 2019, it is clear to everyone’s eye that the pandemic causes a devastating public health disaster. People around the world have been affected in several ways. Students, one of the most affected groups, were afflicted by COVID-19 in both mental and physical ways. It is frightening how COVID-19 is extremely easy to get infected. Consequently, people do fewer social interactions, and that includes going to school. In order to attend school, students ought to use online platforms. Therefore, students spend the majority of their time sitting sedentary in front of the computer, tablet, or television. As mentioned in an earlier paragraph, while studying, students will have to sit only in front of the screen. Accordingly, sitting still in front of the screen is not far away from hailing for problems in physical health. Staring at the screen for a long time can cause students a number of eyesight problems. Additionally, sitting still for a long time can cause backache and besides, lack of physical activities can cause students to lose their muscle mass which is going to affect their future activities. Moreover, not attending school and merely sitting lonely in front of the screen can cause students various mental problems. Social isolation is one of the main mental impacts on students. Staying in quarantine causes students to have less social interaction and when they get used to it, socializing in the future will be harder for them. Equivalently, stress and anxiety are a huge problem caused by online learning. Some students may experience difficulty concentrating or staying focused to the screen, leading to stress. Also, some students may feel heightened anxiety about keeping up to date with the school work. Furthermore, online learning limits students from studying in a practical way. a number of subjects not only have the theory to understand, but studying also requires practicing. For example, Chemistry, this subject has a lot of theory to understand but working in the laboratory is also necessary to observe what the reaction yields. All in all, due to the occurrence of COVID-19, students around the world have to attend school using an online platform to lessen the risk of spreading the virus. As a consequence, students studying online classes may have physical and mental problems.
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a devastating public health disaster.
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around the world have been
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affected
in several ways.
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Students
, one of the most
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affected
groups,
were afflicted
by COVID-19 in both
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mental
and
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physical
ways.

It is frightening how COVID-19 is
extremely
easy to
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get
infected.
Consequently
,
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people
do fewer social interactions, and that includes going to
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school
. In order to attend
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school
,
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students
ought to
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use
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online
platforms.
Therefore
,
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students
spend the majority of their time
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sitting
sedentary in
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front
of the computer, tablet, or television.

As mentioned in an earlier paragraph, while
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in
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screen
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sitting
still
in
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front
of the
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screen
is not far away from hailing for
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problems
in
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physical
health. Staring at the
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screen
for a long time can
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cause
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students
a number of eyesight
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problems
.
Additionally
,
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sitting
still
for a long time can
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cause
backache and
besides
, lack of
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physical
activities can
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cause
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students
to lose their muscle mass which is going to affect their future activities.

Moreover
, not attending
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school
and
merely
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sitting
lonely in
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front
of the
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screen
can
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cause
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students
various
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mental
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problems
. Social isolation is one of the main
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mental
impacts on
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students
. Staying in quarantine
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causes
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students
to have less social interaction and when they
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get
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to it, socializing in the future will be harder for them.
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,
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stress
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problem
caused by
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online
learning.
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Some
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students
may experience difficulty concentrating or staying focused to the
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screen
, leading to
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stress
.
Also
,
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students
may feel heightened anxiety about keeping up to date with the
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Furthermore
,
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online
learning limits
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students
from
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a
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have the theory to understand,
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also
requires practicing.
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a lot of
theory to understand
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but
working in the laboratory is
also
necessary to observe what the reaction yields.

All in all, due to the occurrence of COVID-19,
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students
around the world
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have to
attend
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school
using an
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online
platform to lessen the
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risk
of spreading the virus. As a consequence,
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students
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studying
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online
classes may have
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physical
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IELTS essay Impact of COVID-19 on the Education of Students.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
386 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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