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Some school has a restriction of use phone at school

Some school has a restriction of use phone at school 2bxMb

Love them or loath them in this modern society almost every each individual has a phone even students. In most schools around the world, has certain rules about the use of their phone in school to maintain to focus on their study. It is obviously hard to keep your attention to your subjects if someone is using their phone in class room. Students are learning how to communicate face to face with people which is crucial skill in the outside of school life. Moreover restricting phone use in classroom itself can improve leaning. This is simply beacouse, without these devices, they are far fewer distraction in classroom for teachers and students.

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