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BY and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the dawn of human civilization, the environment is nurturing human beings. In this regard, meticulous usage of resources is of paramount importance. There are different schools of thought among people. Where some reckon that future research needs to be focus on improving the marine environment, or some even beings imaginative to surf the space. On the other hand, others contemplate initiating the development after accurate weather prediction. As for this writer's opinion, I would subscribe to the latter idea. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint. The first reason corroborating my stance is associated with the notion that disbursing funds for accurate weather prediction will result in a plethora of advantages. To be more specific, the weather forecast will accelerate agricultural development. For instance, farmers are able to grow a variety of crops and harvest the crops at the rights time. Not only it will enhance the net production of crops, but it can also aid people to avoid certain unexpected situations. It is notable that in its contemporary life, it is arduous for people to take out their time for a vacation. If they take out time and their plan ruined because of an unexpected rainstorm, it resulted in depression and anger in them. By knowing weather accurately people can plan their vacation. Moreover, the World can avoid many dangerous circumstances, if only they are alerted of imminent danger. By the way of illustration, people can plan better to avoid hurricanes, storms, and tornados. The second compelling rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that initiating research for cleaning oceans or exploring space is a wastage of resources and eventually impractical. It is axiomatic that we should solve the current problems first before foreseeing the future. Consuming funds for space exploration would be not just a wastage of time and money but such kind of research need patience and high technological equipment. It is also worth mentioning that marine life is part of our natural ecosystem, preventing them is as necessary as balancing the natural environment. The government can regulate policies through which people are educated to create less pollution in the oceans and seas. Furthermore, revenue obtained from agricultural development can be utilized to start educating people about saving marine life. It is crystal clear to see how much research in weather prediction would be profitable. By perusing the above paragraph, one can infer that through solving others' issues might be important but the urgent need is to solve imminent problems. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, stimulating research projects for weather forecasts will have a myriad of advantages. Second, spending on other researches is not a dire situation.
BY and large, it
is established
beyond doubt that with the dawn of human civilization, the environment is nurturing human beings. In this regard, meticulous usage of resources is of paramount importance. There are
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schools of
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people
. Where
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some
reckon that future
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research
needs to be focus on improving the marine environment, or
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some
even beings imaginative to surf the space.
On the other hand
, others contemplate initiating the development after accurate
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weather
prediction. As for this writer's opinion, I would subscribe to the latter
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idea
. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.

The
first
reason corroborating my stance
is associated
with the notion that disbursing funds for accurate
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weather
prediction will result in a plethora of advantages. To be more specific, the
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weather
forecast will accelerate agricultural development.
For instance
, farmers are able to grow a variety of crops and harvest the crops at the rights
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time
. Not
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only
it will enhance the net production of crops,
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but
it can
also
aid
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people
to avoid certain unexpected situations. It is notable that in its contemporary life, it is arduous for
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people
to take out their
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time
for a vacation. If they take out
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time
and their plan ruined
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because
of an unexpected rainstorm, it resulted in depression and anger in them. By knowing
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weather
accurately
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people
can plan their vacation.
Moreover
, the World can avoid
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many
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dangerous
circumstances, if
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only
they
are alerted
of imminent
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danger
. By the way of illustration,
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people
can plan better to avoid hurricanes, storms, and tornados.

The second compelling rationale behind my opinion
is rooted
in the fact that initiating
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research
for cleaning oceans or exploring space is a wastage of resources and
eventually
impractical. It is axiomatic that we should solve the
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current
problems
first
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before
foreseeing the future. Consuming funds for space exploration would be not
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just
a wastage of
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time
and money
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but
such kind of
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research
need patience and high technological equipment. It is
also
worth mentioning that marine life is part of our natural ecosystem, preventing them is as necessary as balancing the natural environment. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can regulate policies through which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are educated
to create less pollution in the oceans and seas.
Furthermore
, revenue obtained from agricultural development can
be utilized
to
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start
educating
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people
about saving marine life. It is crystal
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clear
to
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see
how much
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research
in
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weather
prediction would be profitable.

By perusing the above paragraph, one can infer that through solving others' issues might be
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important
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but
the urgent need is to solve imminent problems. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating.
First
, stimulating
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research
projects for
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weather
forecasts will have a myriad of advantages. Second, spending on other
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researches
is not a dire situation.
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Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
466 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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