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I think self-employed is better then work for a company because self-employed give you much freedom.

I think self-employed is better then work for a company because self-employed give you much freedom. But you need to be an skilled person to being a self-employed. Although self-employed is not too easy like work for company but by this way you can easy huge amount of money and can do anything you want. Work for a company is restricted salary, time restricted and the main thing is life will be restricted. So I like self-employed rather than working for a company.

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because
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 by this way you can easy huge amount of money and can do anything you want. Work for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
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 salary, time restricted and the main thing is life will be restricted
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