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advanced vocabulary each paragraph presents a clear central topic and this is really helped by a topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph.

You do try to use advanced vocabulary but this often leads to small mistakes. Follow the 100% rule- don’t try to use any words you are not 100% sure about. It is better to use simple words and make no mistakes than use advanced words, but in error. By 100% I mean that you should be sure about spelling, grammar, collocations, synonyms, antonyms etc. In the long term you should think about starting a vocabulary book. This is a place where you record new vocabulary with spelling, grammar, collocations, synonyms, antonyms and example sentences to make sure you know it 100%. You can then review these new words regularly so that they become a natural part of your vocabulary. You should also give yourself a few minutes at the end to evaluate your vocabulary and make sure you have not made any mistakes. Finally, synonyms are important and you should try to use them, but only use them if you know that they mean exactly the same as the word you are replacing. They should also be grammatically correct. If you are not sure, just repeat the word.
You do try to
use
advanced
vocabulary
but
this
often
leads to
small
mistakes. Follow the 100%
rule
- don’t try to
use
any words you are not 100%
sure
about. It is better to
use
simple words and
make
no mistakes than
use
advanced words,
but
in error. By 100% I mean that you should be
sure
about spelling, grammar, collocations, synonyms, antonyms etc.

In the long term you should
think
about starting a
vocabulary
book. This is a place where you record new
vocabulary
with spelling, grammar, collocations, synonyms, antonyms and example sentences to
make
sure
you know it 100%. You can then review these new words
regularly
so
that they become a natural part of your vocabulary.

You should
also
give yourself a few minutes at the
end
to evaluate your
vocabulary
and
make
sure
you have not made any mistakes.

Finally
, synonyms are
important and
you should try to
use
them,
but
only
use
them if you know that they mean exactly the same as the
word
you are replacing. They should
also
be
grammatically
correct. If you are not
sure
,
just
repeat the
word
.
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IELTS essay advanced vocabulary each paragraph presents a clear central topic and this is really helped by a topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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