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Some people say education is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One the one hand good education is a highly recommended skill in the developed countries, on the other hand of many people in regions of poverty. But what makes education key factor for the development of a country We must acknowledge that education is something that we all need. The differences are just what we learn. Mostly the limited educational horizons of poor and less educated people have more to deal with their personal situation than with problems of bigger effects on a country. Attending school is sometimes too expensive and it does not feed a family. Nevertheless there must be a reason for education. For me it looks like some countries have realized that Education is the key for the globalization process. If we take India for example we can see that a change in the educational system had changed the economy of the country. country has changed from a poor region to a high potential for IT knowledge. In regard to this fact of education seriously and offer it to a wide range of people. Spending money education is the key to a new future effects on the economy and social life. All in all I agree with the importance of education for the development of a country. Less knowledge leads to poverty and. Learning and Knowledge is Power and an investment in the near future and therefore it has to be an official task.
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the limited educational horizons of poor and less educated
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from a poor region to a high potential for IT knowledge.

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education
seriously
and offer it to a wide range of
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. Spending money
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is the key to a new future effects on the economy and social life. All in all I
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agree
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for the development of a
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. Less knowledge leads to poverty and. Learning and Knowledge is Power and an investment in the near future and
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IELTS essay Some people say education is the only critical factor to the development of a country. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
237 words
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