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i have quit my job and it is hindering my performance

i have quit my job and it is hindering my performance xmVo1

I hope that you and your family are doing well. I want to tell you that I have quit my last job on 1st March 2021 because of my English language skills which were hindering my performance there. As of now, I am very happy with my new job. I have been working at the data entry department of a large software development company as a manager for two weeks. In this company, the meeting is conducted every day in the evening which is the end(part) of the duty daily. Then after the meeting, I have to prepare some notes which I report to the CEO. My happiness is growing up due to( I am feeling elevated because of) our meeting(s) that is happening to increase(IMPROVING) my English speaking skills. All the staff working in this company are very kind, punctual and dedicated. Every time, we’re supported by each other(Everybody hear is a part of a team is ready to help ). Ever since I started working for this company, my family has been able to stay with me and we are happy and healthy now. I hope you’ll come to visit me in my flat soon. We will be glad if you come.

I hope that you and your family are doing well. I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that I have quit my last job on 1st March 2021 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my English language This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 which were hindering my performance there.

As of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy with my new job. I have been working at the data entry department of a large software development You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 as a manager for two weeks. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, the meeting is conducted
 every day in the evening which is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
(part) of the duty daily. Then after the meeting, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 prepare This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 notes which I report to the CEO. My happiness is growing up due toDon't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
I am feeling elevated This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of) our meeting(s) that is
 happening to increase(IMPROVING) my Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?English-speaking
English speaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

All the staff working in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 kind, punctual and dedicated. Every time, we’re supported by each other(Everybody The pronoun 'Everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "hears", "heard".hearsheard
hear
 is a part of a team is ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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 )
. Ever since I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 working for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, my family has been able to stay with Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).me, and
me and
 we are happy and healthy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

I hope you’ll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to visit me in my flat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. We will be glad if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. 